Thank you for your offer invite me to the free 1. __________
    summer English course in your school. As for my 2. __________
    choice of the two courses, I’d prefer the five-weeks 3. __________
    course for 50 hours. This would allows me more 4. __________
    time to see your beautiful country while learned 5. __________
    language. I’d like to do some traveling and make 6. __________
    a few new friends. In all the subjects I’m learning 7. __________
    at school, I like English best. I hope me to take this 8. __________
    chance to improve my spoken English level as much 9. __________
    as possibly. I believe I will have a wonderful time 10. _________
    in England this summer.
    【答案解析】
    1. 把invite改為inviting?，F(xiàn)在分詞作定語修飾offer。
    2. 此行正確。
    3. 把five-weeks改為five-week。“數(shù)詞+連字符號(hào)+名詞”作定語，其中的名詞要用單數(shù)。
    4. 把a(bǔ)llows改為allow。在助動(dòng)詞will, would及情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can, may, must等后面，永遠(yuǎn)要用動(dòng)詞原形。
    5. 把learned改為learning。while learning=while I’m learning。
    6. 在language前加the。特指英語這種語言。
    7. 把In改為Of。subjects“科目”，English是其中一個(gè)“科目”，表示級(jí)的比較范圍，若是整體與個(gè)別的關(guān)系，就用of。指時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)范圍，才用in。
    8. 去掉me。主語希望自己做某事，直接用hope to do sth，事實(shí)上，也不能用hope sb to do sth這一句型。
    9. 去掉level。這是中文式英語。improve=make…better。
    10. 把possibly改為possible。as…as possible(盡……)是習(xí)語。