1. 適當(dāng)用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí)，句子開頭不要總是用we / I （比如寫結(jié)尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ） 舉個經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級作文的后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
    2. 善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。
    如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。
    比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
    3. 一定要學(xué)會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。（考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think,
    people, opinion 等等）比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one's competitive edge替換enhance one's competitiveness（提高某物競爭力）
    下面舉一篇南京工程學(xué)院某位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文（14分）的例子，看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
    Computer and I （ By Simmy ）
    I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
    exceedingly 替換 very
    thrilling 替換 exciting
    sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in sth.
    google 替換 search
    an army of 替換 a lot of
    The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
    The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發(fā)生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular
    Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表達(dá)“與…一致”的意思，替換 With …
    Advancement 替換 development