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Describe an experience when you asked help from others.
學(xué)生托?？谡Z內(nèi)容 Student
When I was involved in a academic study program in school, I was asked to find a professor who could give us more information and resources. Unfortunately, the contact information about professor I got went a bit wrong. So when I arrive at the place, I could not find him. At that time, I saw a lady in another office was smiling at me. So I just walked in and asked if she could help. In the end, she gave all the information and resources I needed and I didn't have to search everywhere in that building for the professor.
批改前 Before 批改后 After
發(fā)音 Pronunciation
1 academic
語法 Grammar
1 a academic an academic
2 give us give me
3 about professor I got I got about the professor
表達(dá) Expression
1 went a bit wrong was a bit wrong
2 so when…(too long) (delete)
3 when I arrive when I arrived
外教托?？谡Z示范 Teacher
When I was involved in an academic study program in school, I was asked to find a professor who could give me more information and resources. Unfortunately, the contact information I got about the professor was a bit wrong. When I arrived at the place, I could not find him. At that time, I saw a lady in another office was smiling at me, so I walked in it and asked if she could help. In the end, she gave me the information and resources I needed and I didn't have to search everywhere in that building for the professor.
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Describe an experience when you asked help from others.
學(xué)生托?？谡Z內(nèi)容 Student
When I was involved in a academic study program in school, I was asked to find a professor who could give us more information and resources. Unfortunately, the contact information about professor I got went a bit wrong. So when I arrive at the place, I could not find him. At that time, I saw a lady in another office was smiling at me. So I just walked in and asked if she could help. In the end, she gave all the information and resources I needed and I didn't have to search everywhere in that building for the professor.
批改前 Before 批改后 After
發(fā)音 Pronunciation
1 academic
語法 Grammar
1 a academic an academic
2 give us give me
3 about professor I got I got about the professor
表達(dá) Expression
1 went a bit wrong was a bit wrong
2 so when…(too long) (delete)
3 when I arrive when I arrived
外教托?？谡Z示范 Teacher
When I was involved in an academic study program in school, I was asked to find a professor who could give me more information and resources. Unfortunately, the contact information I got about the professor was a bit wrong. When I arrived at the place, I could not find him. At that time, I saw a lady in another office was smiling at me, so I walked in it and asked if she could help. In the end, she gave me the information and resources I needed and I didn't have to search everywhere in that building for the professor.