提出建議
In my opinion, there are three aspects to be improved so that…
我認為，要改進的方面有三點，以便……
It would be better if…
如果……會更好。
In my opinion, there are three aspects to be improved so that…
我認為，要改進的方面有三點，以便……
It would be better if…
如果……會更好。