柴靜的紀(jì)錄片《穹頂之下》將公眾的注意力再次聚焦到令人頭疼的環(huán)境問題上。近年來,不論是污水排放還是霧霾問題早已成為人們心中揮之不去的陰影。環(huán)境問題關(guān)乎每個(gè)人的生存,因此,倡導(dǎo)并踐行綠色生活方式對于每個(gè)人而言都至關(guān)重要。
一、寫作思路
首段:提出當(dāng)前的環(huán)境問題嚴(yán)重影響到了人們的生活質(zhì)量。與此同時(shí),人們的環(huán)保意識也有了很大的提高,開始重視這一問題,由此引出綠色生活方式的主題。
關(guān)鍵點(diǎn):環(huán)境問題嚴(yán)重+環(huán)保意識提高。
中段:具體闡述為了實(shí)現(xiàn)綠色生活方式,我們應(yīng)該做些什么??梢詮睦诸?、生活用電、綠色出行、多使用可再生資源等角度來寫,并用例子來說明。
關(guān)鍵點(diǎn):一定要從具體事例出發(fā),可以多舉幾個(gè)例子。
末段:提出對于綠色生活方式的向往,可以簡要說明綠色生活方式能給人們的生活帶來哪些好處。
關(guān)鍵點(diǎn):提出期望。
二、參考范文和譯文
參考范文:A Green Life Style
In this day and age, environmental degradation presents great danger to the public. People in my country, and other places, have to bear polluted water and haze day after day. As public awareness of the need for environmental protection grows in these countries, it is urgent to learn how to establish a green life style.
To achieve a green life style, we must adjust our behavior. This can be done even with simple things. For example, we could sort out our trash for better recycling. At home, we can use lights and other electricity only when needed. We should properly maintain air conditioners twice a year so they will run efficiently, and, even more importantly, make sure doors and windows fit properly and are sealed so that we can use less energy in heating and cooling. Other simple steps that make a big difference include using public transportation instead of driving private cars.
Commuters can choose to take buses, subways or share cars with others, which not only relieves traffic jams but also reduces gas emission.
In my mind, it is high time to establish a general concept of sustainable development and green life style in China. The Earth has provided humans what they need; it is time to pay back. Only through a green life, can we ensure that we and our children live in an environment with green water and mountains, without traffic jams, and in an era with better living habits.
參考譯文:
在當(dāng)今這個(gè)時(shí)代,環(huán)境惡化給公眾的生活帶來了巨大危害。在我們國家以及其他一些地方,人們不得不每日忍受污水和霧霾。隨著這些國家公眾環(huán)保意識的提高,學(xué)習(xí)創(chuàng)建綠色生活方式十分緊迫。
為了實(shí)現(xiàn)綠色生活,我們必須調(diào)整自己的行為,甚至可以通過簡單的小事實(shí)現(xiàn)。比如,我們可以將垃圾分類,以便于更好地回收利用。在家中,我們可以只在需要時(shí)才開燈或使用其他電器。我們應(yīng)該每年為空調(diào)好好做兩次保養(yǎng),以使其有效運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)。更重要的是,要保證門窗安裝合適、密不透風(fēng),這樣在取暖或制冷時(shí)就可以少用一些能源。其他一些簡單的做法也能產(chǎn)生巨大的影響,包括使用公共交通工具,不開私家車。通勤族可以選擇乘坐公共汽車、地鐵或是與他人合用車輛,這不僅可以減輕交通堵塞,也可以減少尾氣排放。
在我看來,是時(shí)候在中國廣泛樹立可持續(xù)發(fā)展和綠色生活的理念了。地球已經(jīng)為人類提供了他們所需的一切,是時(shí)候回報(bào)地球了。只有綠色生活,我們才能保證我們以及子孫后代生活在青山綠水、沒有擁堵的環(huán)境中,也生活在一個(gè)擁有更好生活習(xí)慣的時(shí)代。
一、寫作思路
首段:提出當(dāng)前的環(huán)境問題嚴(yán)重影響到了人們的生活質(zhì)量。與此同時(shí),人們的環(huán)保意識也有了很大的提高,開始重視這一問題,由此引出綠色生活方式的主題。
關(guān)鍵點(diǎn):環(huán)境問題嚴(yán)重+環(huán)保意識提高。
中段:具體闡述為了實(shí)現(xiàn)綠色生活方式,我們應(yīng)該做些什么??梢詮睦诸?、生活用電、綠色出行、多使用可再生資源等角度來寫,并用例子來說明。
關(guān)鍵點(diǎn):一定要從具體事例出發(fā),可以多舉幾個(gè)例子。
末段:提出對于綠色生活方式的向往,可以簡要說明綠色生活方式能給人們的生活帶來哪些好處。
關(guān)鍵點(diǎn):提出期望。
二、參考范文和譯文
參考范文:A Green Life Style
In this day and age, environmental degradation presents great danger to the public. People in my country, and other places, have to bear polluted water and haze day after day. As public awareness of the need for environmental protection grows in these countries, it is urgent to learn how to establish a green life style.
To achieve a green life style, we must adjust our behavior. This can be done even with simple things. For example, we could sort out our trash for better recycling. At home, we can use lights and other electricity only when needed. We should properly maintain air conditioners twice a year so they will run efficiently, and, even more importantly, make sure doors and windows fit properly and are sealed so that we can use less energy in heating and cooling. Other simple steps that make a big difference include using public transportation instead of driving private cars.
Commuters can choose to take buses, subways or share cars with others, which not only relieves traffic jams but also reduces gas emission.
In my mind, it is high time to establish a general concept of sustainable development and green life style in China. The Earth has provided humans what they need; it is time to pay back. Only through a green life, can we ensure that we and our children live in an environment with green water and mountains, without traffic jams, and in an era with better living habits.
參考譯文:
在當(dāng)今這個(gè)時(shí)代,環(huán)境惡化給公眾的生活帶來了巨大危害。在我們國家以及其他一些地方,人們不得不每日忍受污水和霧霾。隨著這些國家公眾環(huán)保意識的提高,學(xué)習(xí)創(chuàng)建綠色生活方式十分緊迫。
為了實(shí)現(xiàn)綠色生活,我們必須調(diào)整自己的行為,甚至可以通過簡單的小事實(shí)現(xiàn)。比如,我們可以將垃圾分類,以便于更好地回收利用。在家中,我們可以只在需要時(shí)才開燈或使用其他電器。我們應(yīng)該每年為空調(diào)好好做兩次保養(yǎng),以使其有效運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)。更重要的是,要保證門窗安裝合適、密不透風(fēng),這樣在取暖或制冷時(shí)就可以少用一些能源。其他一些簡單的做法也能產(chǎn)生巨大的影響,包括使用公共交通工具,不開私家車。通勤族可以選擇乘坐公共汽車、地鐵或是與他人合用車輛,這不僅可以減輕交通堵塞,也可以減少尾氣排放。
在我看來,是時(shí)候在中國廣泛樹立可持續(xù)發(fā)展和綠色生活的理念了。地球已經(jīng)為人類提供了他們所需的一切,是時(shí)候回報(bào)地球了。只有綠色生活,我們才能保證我們以及子孫后代生活在青山綠水、沒有擁堵的環(huán)境中,也生活在一個(gè)擁有更好生活習(xí)慣的時(shí)代。