Last weekend, I travelled in Hong Kong. Hong Kong is a very beautiful modern city, it’s to the south of Guangdong. There are many tall buildings and wonderful places to visit, such as: Victorian Park(維多利亞公園), Disneyland park(迪士尼樂園). What I like best is to visit the Ocean Park(海洋公園). The Ocean Park is the biggest recreation center(休閑中心) in the southeast of Asia(東南亞), each year many people go there to pay a visit. We saw many performances by the dolphins and the whales. The performances were very exciting and the animals were very lovely. We really had a good time in Hong Kong.
    教師點評: 小作者向我們介紹了香港的的旅游景點,并且較詳細地介紹了海洋公園的規(guī)模和動物的精彩表演.文章簡潔樸實,用詞恰當,不愧為一篇佳作.