(五)調(diào)查結(jié)果(Findings)
報告的調(diào)查結(jié)果部分是報告建議的依據(jù),其內(nèi)容應(yīng)當(dāng)準(zhǔn)確無誤,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,語言流暢、銜接。這部分內(nèi)容的每一個段落都應(yīng)當(dāng)有一個明確的主題句,一般放在段首,這樣便于讀者攝取這部分的信息。以下是這部分主題句寫作的常見句型:
· The findings of the investigation indicate that…
· It was proposed/found/ felt/discovered that…
· It was generally the case that…
· Most people thought/suggested that…
· A number of people mentioned that…
· Several changes were put forward.
· Several staff members expressed the view that…
若報告中需提供圖表統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)或描述行情走勢,撰寫人應(yīng)當(dāng)熟悉這方面寫作的常用句型,以下就是該方面寫作的一些典型句子結(jié)構(gòu):
· The table/chart/graph/diagram/figure/statistics
shows/describes/illustrates that…
· As it can be seen from the table/chart/figure…
· It is clear/apparent from the
table/chart/graph/diagram/figure/statistics that…
· The number of…increased/jumped/rose
suddenly/rapidly/dramatically from…to…
· The number of…decreased/dropped/fell greatly/significantly
sharply from…to…
· The number of…fluctuated slowly/slightly between…to…
· The number of…remained steady/stable (stayed the same)
between…to…
· There was a (very) sudden/rapid/dramatic/significant
increase/jump/rise in the number
of…from…to…
· There was a (very) sharp/steep/steady/gradual/slow/slight
decrease/drop/fall in the
number of…from…to…
· The monthly profit/figures peaked in December at 10%.
· The monthly profit/figures reached a peak/a high (point) in
December at 10%.
· The monthly profit/figures bottomed out in December at 10%.
· Sales witnessed a great rise/increase/drop/fall between…to…
(六)結(jié)論(Conclusions)
報告的結(jié)論部分是寫報告的人在報告調(diào)查結(jié)果的基礎(chǔ)上是對調(diào)查結(jié)果進行總結(jié)和解釋。同一調(diào)查結(jié)果會因為撰寫者的不同而得出不同的結(jié)論,但這部分不應(yīng)當(dāng)包括報告前文中沒有提到的新的信息。
(七)建議(Recommendations)
建議往往是許多商務(wù)報告寫作的最重要部分。一份報告有效程度常常取決于報告中所提供的建議的質(zhì)量高低。建議部分主要內(nèi)容為報告撰寫人在經(jīng)過充分的論證后認(rèn)為應(yīng)當(dāng)采取的措施或行動。報告人有時也會描述采取措施后可能出現(xiàn)的后果或情形。
(八)附錄(Appendices)
正式的商務(wù)報告為了增強報告的說服力或真實性往往會有一些附加材料,因其篇幅較長不宜放在報告當(dāng)中,只能選擇放在附錄中。這部分內(nèi)容可能包括圖表統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)、實驗室報告、問卷調(diào)查等。當(dāng)然,簡短報告若無此需要則不需增加附錄部分。
五、如何提高商務(wù)英語報告的可讀性
許多人在寫完報告之后往往會遺忘或忽視報告寫作的最后一個過程:對報告進行編輯排版,使之結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,內(nèi)容便于讀者閱讀。報告中所增加的一些信息或符號如同公路上路標(biāo)指引這司機開車一樣為讀者降低閱讀難度,加快閱讀速度,這一點對爭分奪秒的商業(yè)人士來說尤為重要。以下是一些提供報告可讀性的常見手段:
· 為報告提供小標(biāo)題;
· 使用小段落,盡量做到每個小話題都用一個段落來闡述;
· 段落與段落之間空一行;
· 提供段落的小標(biāo)題;
· 使用列舉符號羅列具體信息;
· 使用星號或下劃線強調(diào)重點內(nèi)容。
下面為一份非正式報告的兩種形式,毋庸置疑,右邊經(jīng)過編輯后的版本結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、層次分明,內(nèi)容清楚、一目了然,其格式不論是對寫正式報告還是非正式報告都值得借鑒。
Proposed Incentive Scheme
Mr. John Smith, Office Manager, has asked me to write this report on
a proposed incentive scheme offering rewards, possibly financial, to
members of staff for money-saving ideas or ways to improve work
practices.
A sample of workers was individually asked for their opinions. The
following is the findings: most thought the incentive scheme was a
good idea; most preferred financial rewards; some suggested time off
instead; A few thought this was a management area. In general most
workers were in favor of an incentive scheme offering financial
rewards. It is recommended that the scheme be introduced.
Richard Stewart
March 18, 20-- Report on A Proposed Incentive Scheme
Terms of Reference:
Mr. John Smith, Office Manager, has asked me to write this report on
a proposed incentive scheme offering rewards, possibly financial, to
members of staff for money-saving ideas or ways to improve work
practices.
Proceedings:
A sample of workers was individually asked for their opinions.
Findings:
u Most thought the incentive scheme was a good idea.
u Most preferred financial rewards.
u Some suggested time off instead.
u A few thought this was a management area.
Conclusions:
In general most workers were in favor of an incentive scheme
offering financial rewards.
Recommendations:
It is recommended that the scheme be introduced.
Richard Stewart
March 18, 20--
總之,在商務(wù)英語各類報告的寫作過程中若能抓住以上幾點來寫,不愁無從下筆。當(dāng)然,這還要學(xué)習(xí)者平時英語知識和商務(wù)知識的積累,才能達(dá)到更好的效果。
報告的調(diào)查結(jié)果部分是報告建議的依據(jù),其內(nèi)容應(yīng)當(dāng)準(zhǔn)確無誤,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,語言流暢、銜接。這部分內(nèi)容的每一個段落都應(yīng)當(dāng)有一個明確的主題句,一般放在段首,這樣便于讀者攝取這部分的信息。以下是這部分主題句寫作的常見句型:
· The findings of the investigation indicate that…
· It was proposed/found/ felt/discovered that…
· It was generally the case that…
· Most people thought/suggested that…
· A number of people mentioned that…
· Several changes were put forward.
· Several staff members expressed the view that…
若報告中需提供圖表統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)或描述行情走勢,撰寫人應(yīng)當(dāng)熟悉這方面寫作的常用句型,以下就是該方面寫作的一些典型句子結(jié)構(gòu):
· The table/chart/graph/diagram/figure/statistics
shows/describes/illustrates that…
· As it can be seen from the table/chart/figure…
· It is clear/apparent from the
table/chart/graph/diagram/figure/statistics that…
· The number of…increased/jumped/rose
suddenly/rapidly/dramatically from…to…
· The number of…decreased/dropped/fell greatly/significantly
sharply from…to…
· The number of…fluctuated slowly/slightly between…to…
· The number of…remained steady/stable (stayed the same)
between…to…
· There was a (very) sudden/rapid/dramatic/significant
increase/jump/rise in the number
of…from…to…
· There was a (very) sharp/steep/steady/gradual/slow/slight
decrease/drop/fall in the
number of…from…to…
· The monthly profit/figures peaked in December at 10%.
· The monthly profit/figures reached a peak/a high (point) in
December at 10%.
· The monthly profit/figures bottomed out in December at 10%.
· Sales witnessed a great rise/increase/drop/fall between…to…
(六)結(jié)論(Conclusions)
報告的結(jié)論部分是寫報告的人在報告調(diào)查結(jié)果的基礎(chǔ)上是對調(diào)查結(jié)果進行總結(jié)和解釋。同一調(diào)查結(jié)果會因為撰寫者的不同而得出不同的結(jié)論,但這部分不應(yīng)當(dāng)包括報告前文中沒有提到的新的信息。
(七)建議(Recommendations)
建議往往是許多商務(wù)報告寫作的最重要部分。一份報告有效程度常常取決于報告中所提供的建議的質(zhì)量高低。建議部分主要內(nèi)容為報告撰寫人在經(jīng)過充分的論證后認(rèn)為應(yīng)當(dāng)采取的措施或行動。報告人有時也會描述采取措施后可能出現(xiàn)的后果或情形。
(八)附錄(Appendices)
正式的商務(wù)報告為了增強報告的說服力或真實性往往會有一些附加材料,因其篇幅較長不宜放在報告當(dāng)中,只能選擇放在附錄中。這部分內(nèi)容可能包括圖表統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)、實驗室報告、問卷調(diào)查等。當(dāng)然,簡短報告若無此需要則不需增加附錄部分。
五、如何提高商務(wù)英語報告的可讀性
許多人在寫完報告之后往往會遺忘或忽視報告寫作的最后一個過程:對報告進行編輯排版,使之結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,內(nèi)容便于讀者閱讀。報告中所增加的一些信息或符號如同公路上路標(biāo)指引這司機開車一樣為讀者降低閱讀難度,加快閱讀速度,這一點對爭分奪秒的商業(yè)人士來說尤為重要。以下是一些提供報告可讀性的常見手段:
· 為報告提供小標(biāo)題;
· 使用小段落,盡量做到每個小話題都用一個段落來闡述;
· 段落與段落之間空一行;
· 提供段落的小標(biāo)題;
· 使用列舉符號羅列具體信息;
· 使用星號或下劃線強調(diào)重點內(nèi)容。
下面為一份非正式報告的兩種形式,毋庸置疑,右邊經(jīng)過編輯后的版本結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、層次分明,內(nèi)容清楚、一目了然,其格式不論是對寫正式報告還是非正式報告都值得借鑒。
Proposed Incentive Scheme
Mr. John Smith, Office Manager, has asked me to write this report on
a proposed incentive scheme offering rewards, possibly financial, to
members of staff for money-saving ideas or ways to improve work
practices.
A sample of workers was individually asked for their opinions. The
following is the findings: most thought the incentive scheme was a
good idea; most preferred financial rewards; some suggested time off
instead; A few thought this was a management area. In general most
workers were in favor of an incentive scheme offering financial
rewards. It is recommended that the scheme be introduced.
Richard Stewart
March 18, 20-- Report on A Proposed Incentive Scheme
Terms of Reference:
Mr. John Smith, Office Manager, has asked me to write this report on
a proposed incentive scheme offering rewards, possibly financial, to
members of staff for money-saving ideas or ways to improve work
practices.
Proceedings:
A sample of workers was individually asked for their opinions.
Findings:
u Most thought the incentive scheme was a good idea.
u Most preferred financial rewards.
u Some suggested time off instead.
u A few thought this was a management area.
Conclusions:
In general most workers were in favor of an incentive scheme
offering financial rewards.
Recommendations:
It is recommended that the scheme be introduced.
Richard Stewart
March 18, 20--
總之,在商務(wù)英語各類報告的寫作過程中若能抓住以上幾點來寫,不愁無從下筆。當(dāng)然,這還要學(xué)習(xí)者平時英語知識和商務(wù)知識的積累,才能達(dá)到更好的效果。