先介紹一下我的考試的WRITING：30
INTEGRATED: 寫(xiě)了260多個(gè)字，不多，不過(guò)我認(rèn)為每一點(diǎn)都很到位。不過(guò)可惜的是，我實(shí)在是不記得自己寫(xiě)的啥了?；蛟S有補(bǔ)償?shù)霓k法：考試前寫(xiě)過(guò)一篇類(lèi)似的，從思路，寫(xiě)作方式，到整體結(jié)構(gòu)都應(yīng)該和我考試時(shí)寫(xiě)的大同小異，我要花時(shí)間找找，然后傳在這里，給大家講一講。
INDEPENDENT：寫(xiě)了472 個(gè)字（記得很清楚 呵呵）。同樣很遺憾，實(shí)在時(shí)記不起自己寫(xiě)過(guò)什么了，但是當(dāng)時(shí)寫(xiě)這篇文章的狀態(tài)和考前沖刺時(shí)的狀態(tài)一模一樣，思想源源不斷，根本不愁沒(méi)有寫(xiě)的。所以我考前沖刺寫(xiě)的文章應(yīng)該是有價(jià)值的?！ ?BR> 這里我要詳細(xì)講，相信大家也很期望吧， 呵呵不要著急。講之前，我想征求一下大家的意見(jiàn)， 我有幾種方式：
1 我介紹一下我的準(zhǔn)備過(guò)程，及怎樣才能將一個(gè)IC 一步一步的展開(kāi)，后成為一篇文章。
2 我自己在準(zhǔn)備的時(shí)候?qū)戇^(guò)N篇練習(xí)文，大家是要我全部上傳呢？ 還是挑幾篇我認(rèn)為有代表性的給大家好好剖析一下？
3 我可以幫大家分析幾個(gè)IC，通過(guò)我的分析我相信能幫大家打開(kāi)思路，這是我認(rèn)為準(zhǔn)備TOEFL作文重要也是另很多人頭疼的東西了，N 多次看見(jiàn)有人說(shuō)寫(xiě)作些不出來(lái)東西，其實(shí)這些都是中國(guó)過(guò)于集中式思維教育的結(jié)果，發(fā)散式的思維是寫(xiě)一篇好文章的基礎(chǔ)（包括GRE作文）。通過(guò)對(duì)IC展開(kāi)，我相信大家在這方面會(huì)有進(jìn)步的。
后我不想過(guò)于的說(shuō)太多我的想法，用法，句法，畢竟說(shuō)太多會(huì)讓大家有迷惑性，我想告訴大家一種思維方式和模式，然后大家就可以創(chuàng)造出自己獨(dú)有的源源不斷的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容了。（我需要一些時(shí)間整理自己的文章，請(qǐng)大家耐心等待，我會(huì)以快速度完成的，明天又是一天滿(mǎn)課...哎!) 以上三種方式大家認(rèn)為如何? 如果有更好的意見(jiàn)請(qǐng)及時(shí)回饋，畢竟我沒(méi)有太多的時(shí)間啊， 呵呵。
INDEPENDENT 部分是大多數(shù)人的難題，原因是因?yàn)楹芏嗳硕颊也坏皆?huà)說(shuō)，這個(gè)問(wèn)題在我身上也出現(xiàn)過(guò)，我剛開(kāi)始準(zhǔn)備寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候基本上要用45分鐘左右才能寫(xiě)完一篇文章（字?jǐn)?shù)300左右徘徊）。一直到考前20天左右我都還有這個(gè)毛病。更有的時(shí)候是東西在自己的腦子里，可是就是不知道怎樣把它寫(xiě)出來(lái)，一個(gè)句子翻來(lái)覆去的寫(xiě)，結(jié)果時(shí)間就這么浪費(fèi)掉了。相信這個(gè)是大多數(shù)人的通病吧。
為了引出我的內(nèi)容，首先我來(lái)講講模板問(wèn)題：
我認(rèn)為背模板不要背得很詳細(xì)，那樣對(duì)思想的禁錮很大。對(duì)以后自己思路的形成不利。但是我不能說(shuō)我沒(méi)有模板，我的模板就是：
開(kāi)頭：IC SENTENCE, 開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，沒(méi)有必要太磨嘰（也可以通過(guò)一兩句話(huà)來(lái)引出自己的TS）。 但是TS 在第一段，我建議，一定要出現(xiàn)。這樣會(huì)讓閱讀人很容易進(jìn)入狀態(tài)找到突破口。當(dāng)然也可以不用非要在第一段亮出自己的TS，不過(guò)這種情況下要對(duì)閱卷人形成好的印象需要非常好的ORGANIZATION。第一段也可以擺出自己每段的分論點(diǎn)，也可以不用（如果你覺(jué)得第一段有分論點(diǎn)，而每段開(kāi)頭又有分論點(diǎn)會(huì)造成重復(fù)的話(huà)，可以選擇不用）。
然后：緊接著THREE/TWO 段分論點(diǎn)，用來(lái)支持自己的TS。
后：再次扣回主題（避免單一的重復(fù)第一段）。
也許很多人都會(huì)想我在說(shuō)廢話(huà)，但是這個(gè)的的確確就是我的模板。（不信的話(huà)請(qǐng)閱讀我上傳的文章，沒(méi)有任何一篇不是按照這個(gè)思路來(lái)的，但是每一篇都不用固定的網(wǎng)上那種模板寫(xiě)出來(lái)的）。請(qǐng)大家認(rèn)真想一想，這個(gè)是作文的主導(dǎo)思想??！
剛才說(shuō)的是結(jié)構(gòu)問(wèn)題，現(xiàn)在來(lái)談?wù)務(wù)Z言。在語(yǔ)言上我從來(lái)都沒(méi)有背過(guò)任何一個(gè)句型，全部是自己的語(yǔ)言組織起來(lái)的！這可能在某一個(gè)層面上揭示出一個(gè)問(wèn)題，TOEFL 作文不需要太高深需要人思考很久才能看懂的句子！所以大家慎用在GRE 上背來(lái)的超長(zhǎng)，超難的句子。另外我在語(yǔ)言上對(duì)自己有的一個(gè)要求，那就是要用得NATIVE 即AMERICAN STYLE。這個(gè)其實(shí)我也不好說(shuō)，因?yàn)槭且环N久而久之的感覺(jué)吧。我的建議是不要在自己的腦子里想出一串自己以為很妙的中文句子，然后翻譯出來(lái)。這個(gè)做法導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果是90%情況下你翻譯出來(lái)的句子是“四不像”，既沒(méi)有中國(guó)的韻味，也不符合美國(guó)人的閱讀習(xí)慣?？上攵?，閱讀人是不會(huì)APPRECIATE這樣的句子的。大家盡量用英文去想，慢慢練習(xí)。
NOW，講講怎樣講打開(kāi)自己的思維：
這個(gè)完全歸功于高分120。 這本書(shū)我從圖書(shū)館借的，已經(jīng)還了，所以具體它講的什么我忘了，可是我卻永遠(yuǎn)忘不了我體會(huì)出來(lái)的精髓！其實(shí)嚴(yán)格的說(shuō)我就看了5頁(yè)，用了1個(gè)小時(shí)，這5頁(yè)是作者就一個(gè)IC 用了十個(gè)不同的段落去寫(xiě)。（而我們卻為了寫(xiě)一個(gè)而發(fā)愁）?？次乙院?，我仔細(xì)分析了一下，作者說(shuō)的話(huà)都是當(dāng)初在我腦子里有的話(huà)，只是我急于找一個(gè)PERFECT POINT 去展開(kāi)，而把它們?nèi)縋ASS 掉了，可是那個(gè)作者確確實(shí)實(shí)將我PASS掉的東西寫(xiě)出了10段不同而且又都很不錯(cuò)的SUPPORTING PARAGRAPH。（相信很多人有這種體會(huì)吧，腦子里有東西，卻總是在猶豫自己到底要不要寫(xiě)？）
于是我的所得：思想有多遠(yuǎn)，你就寫(xiě)多遠(yuǎn)，跟著自己的思想走?。ó?dāng)然要于自己的TS 有關(guān)） 請(qǐng)大家花個(gè)幾分鐘好好體會(huì)一下這句話(huà)，這并不是我所能傳授的一種很CONCRETE 的東西，這句話(huà)太ABSTRACT 了，我并不奢望大家都能一下子有所感覺(jué)，但是希望大家在練習(xí)的時(shí)候會(huì)對(duì)這句話(huà)有更多的體會(huì)。 我也是在不斷的練習(xí)中慢慢深化這個(gè)理念的。
用這個(gè)思想我來(lái)給大家一個(gè)EXAMPLE 吧：
IC: Pets should be treated as family members
首先確定自己的立場(chǎng)，大概估計(jì)一下自己在那一方面的話(huà)比較多，正、反、還是中立。選好后刻在你腦子里，免得偏題。
我的立場(chǎng)： Yes, they should be treated as family memebers.
很明顯選擇這個(gè)立場(chǎng)就是要選擇PETS 對(duì)我們有利的地方，不然的話(huà)誰(shuí)要它?。∮谑遣煌５膯?wèn)自己，PETS 對(duì)我們有什么好處呢？ 首先PETS 都有什么樣的呢？ 第一個(gè)出現(xiàn)在我腦子里的是狗。那么狗對(duì)我們有什么好處呢？ 人類(lèi)忠實(shí)的朋友。但是怎么繼續(xù)呢？養(yǎng)過(guò)狗的人體會(huì)深刻，可以把自己和狗的相處講出來(lái)，沒(méi)養(yǎng)過(guò)的難道就不能編一段自己與狗相處的日子嗎？ 于是我編了一段：小的時(shí)候家里養(yǎng)的狗是我的玩伴，給我?guī)?lái)了快樂(lè)。狗還有什么好處呢？大家還在什么情況下聽(tīng)過(guò)狗呢？ 導(dǎo)盲犬聽(tīng)過(guò)吧，它們具體工作是什么呢？ 這下你有得寫(xiě)了吧，這個(gè)可以寫(xiě)上幾大段都不重復(fù)，導(dǎo)盲犬幫助盲人領(lǐng)路，于是盲人可以自己出巡不用請(qǐng)個(gè)小保姆照顧，它們知道車(chē)來(lái)了要停，走盲道，甚至有的狗可以幫人開(kāi)門(mén)！ 不管它們能否做這些事，寫(xiě)上去再說(shuō)（當(dāng)然不要太離譜，它們可不會(huì)飛）。再想想平時(shí)什么地方狗多呢？ 公園里??！ 老年人大清早出來(lái)散狗，晚上吃完飯還要散，說(shuō)明什么呢？ 說(shuō)明他們?cè)诰裆蠈?duì)狗有依賴(lài)性啊，兒女外出打工，工作，一年難得回來(lái)幾回，狗自然而然可以擔(dān)當(dāng)這個(gè)DUTY了，甚至還有些老人沒(méi)有兒女，于是它們把自己的PETS 當(dāng)成自己的兒女了。有些地方還有什么狗的各種各樣的比賽，這些比賽得獎(jiǎng)了是對(duì)家庭的一種榮譽(yù)，沒(méi)得獎(jiǎng)大家也在一起HAPPY 了一下啊......等等等等。大家要不停的問(wèn)自己，出現(xiàn)了思想，不要覺(jué)得太膚淺而PASS掉，多聯(lián)想一下，思路不是你一開(kāi)始分析IC 的時(shí)候就完成的，有的時(shí)候你在寫(xiě)的時(shí)候，思路會(huì)源源不斷的涌出，這個(gè)時(shí)候說(shuō)明你初得要領(lǐng)了。
現(xiàn)在奉上我寫(xiě)的一篇關(guān)于這個(gè)IC的文章：
Pets are universal all over the world. People in different countries have pets. I have been wondering why it is so common for us to have pets? Well, they are apparently our friends. Sometimes they are great helpers. And to some people, they are important family members.
Pets can be friends with which we can live and spend time. I used to have a pet dog when I was very young. It's the only friend I have because Mom and Dad used to be too busy with their work to spend time with me. The only way that I could have fun was to play with my pet. We used to race, swim, and even sleep together. It has a unique position in my childhood memory, because it made my earlier years so much fun instead of being lonely and miserable.
Pets are not merely animals that serve the purpose of making fun for us as someone would think. Instead they have their position in this society that is irreplaceable. They are important helpers to the disabled. For example, some dogs can lead the way for the blind. They know which would be the safe path to go, and they know when to stop if a car passes by. They have made the lives of the blind much easier because these people can go outside themselves. Besides leading the way, some pets can even open the door for people who could not stand up right to do it. I can't imagine what their life would be without these aid pets.
Pets can also serve as a psychological comfort for the old. It's quite common to see the old walk their dogs in nearby parks early in the morning and evening. These people need someone to be with all the time. But their children have their own lives and it's not possible for them to be with their parents all the time. Therefore this duty is taken by these pets. Some old people who don't have any children even treat these pets as their children.
Pets are different than other wild animals,. They play a more important role in our lives in some way. They make us happy and help us. So if we decide to have a pet in our family, we should also be prepared to treat it as a family member in return for the benefits it brings us.
讀過(guò)這篇文章會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，并沒(méi)有什么閃光句型或者詞語(yǔ)，文采一般，但是我考試時(shí)的作文也不會(huì)比這個(gè)高到那里去。這個(gè)是我剛有體會(huì)時(shí)早期的寫(xiě)作，大家初步分析，并試著自己就一個(gè)IC 分析分析看。呆會(huì)我會(huì)再來(lái)再給大家分析幾個(gè)IC，并附上我的寫(xiě)作。大家千萬(wàn)不要試著模仿我的用詞用句，就像我說(shuō)的，都很簡(jiǎn)單，每個(gè)人都會(huì)，關(guān)鍵看看文章的思路和思想。 如文章有不妥之處，大家敬請(qǐng)指出，我們共同進(jìn)步。
IC:it is more important to work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn a lot of money
I disagree with the statement that it is more important to work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn a lot of money. Making a lot of money means having more opportunities. Therefore it is more beneficial to me than simply taking a job that I enjoy.
At this current situation where we are suffering from this global economic downturn, what concerns me the most is whether or not I can live through this hard time, whether or not I will be able to support my family. Therefore I definitely want a job that I can make more money because it meets my most urgent requirement. Enjoyment would be negligible when compared with livelihood.
Making a lot of money will also lead to more happiness than the joy you get from taking a job you like. For example, if I am a millionaire, not only can I provide my families a decent living, but also I can have excess money so that I can donate to the poorer people. I think the overall happiness of the poor getting aid would overmount the happy feeling I myself get. In this sense, taking a job that I enjoy rather than a job with a decent pay would be a little more selfish.
Finally, having high payment job doesn't necessarily mean that I will lose the chance to do the job that I enjoy. I can certainly consider doing the job that I enjoy after I save a certain amount of money. This strong economic foundation will reduce a lot of my concerns, therefore I can do the job that I like more freely and I will end up enjoying the job more. Besides this benefit, a strong economic ability also makes it possible for me to enjoy a lot more things. Then, maybe the job that I once considered interesting will not be that fun anymore.
While some people may argue that this stance is too realistic or materialistic, I want to remind everyone that we, as human beings, have more obligations that we need to fulfill. A high payment job will make these a lot easier to meet. What's more, it also will offer us opportunities. So payment will be my number one concern when i choose a job.
IC：Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society.Choose another technological innovation that you think is important.
Although internet came into being about 2 decades ago, it has changed the way we live much more than the last 200 years. Its influence on business, communication and information is so profound that people now simply can't live without it.
Based on the development of internet, a lot of new types of business ranging from international conglomerate to regional small online shops are also established. The most famous internet based international conglomerate would be Google. Companies like this basically do not sell products but their service. This changed the traditional way of doing business which always involved some concrete products sell to people. Internet opens a cyber world in which a huge market is untapped. Besides large companies, internet also prospers small businesses. For example, local stores can do their business online. All they have to do is to create a website of their own and all customers need to do is to go to their websites and order what they want. Then they just need wait at home for the products they just purchased to be delivered. This way, we never need to worry about the traditional exhausting shopping.
Internet also fundamentally changed the way people communicate. There are a lot of chatting programs, such as MSN, YAHOO MESSENGER, SKYPE, that make it possible for people from different parts of the world to have a conversation with each other as long as everyone has access to internet. They even provide audio and video services meaning not only people can chat, but also they can hear and see each other. Besides that, what really makes them appealing is that they don't charge us for doing these things. These advantages definitely surpass the service that mobile phone provides us.
Internet is also like a huge tank that can contain almost infinite information. A search has shown that right now the information that internet can provide us exceeds any library in the world and some even argue that it has more information than all the libraries in total. I certainly wouldn't doubt that. I use internet to search for a lot of information. Whenever I have an project to finish, the first thing I do is to go to the internet to find relevant materials.
There is no doubt that internet has had a fundamental change on our everyday life. Though there are many problems that accompany with it, we can't deny that internet is one of the most innovations in human history.
IC:You are planning to study abroad.What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience?Why?
Studying abroad is becoming more and more popular among college students. It not only provides us opportunity to learn sophisticated technology and knowledge but also gives us chances to experience different cultures and life. However the fact that it will get me away from my family and friends for a long time is a bother to me.
One of the major reasons that I want to study abroad is to acquire state of the art technology in a particular field. Now I am majoring electrical engineering, and I want to get further education in this field as a post graduate. However electrical engineering is not as well developed in my own nation as it is in the US. So in order to be an expert in this field and to follow my personal interest, studying abroad is a very good option. This way I can always have access to valuable knowledge as well as keep myself in the frontier in electrical engineering.
Besides getting technical knowledge, studying abroad is also a chance for me to learn about different culture. It's quite obvious that life in another country would be totally different from that of my own. First of all, I have to speak their language so that I can interact with other people. Secondly, I have to adjust myself to their way of thinking, and way of dealing with people, in other words, social skills. Finally I would also acquaint myself with a variety of new things that simply don't exist in my home country. For example, American football is not that popular in China, but if I study in America and I want to have topic with other students, I think what I will have to do is to force myself to watch it, least of all, get to know it a little bit. These experiences would be very valuable since you can not get them anywhere else but this particular country.
While I experience new culture I would certainly miss things and people traditional in my own country. Studying abroad is a long-term investment. I might be away from home for a year or maybe even two years, which means that I will not be able to see my families and friends for that long time. Without doubt, I will miss them a lot, and sometimes this miss might be so intense that I simply can't deal with it. What's more I will miss the traditional foods so much as well. I never expect that I can find the similar flavor of those foods in another country. So that poses me another problem of studying abroad.
Despite all these disadvantages, I still prefer to study abroad. Because after all, my ultimate goal is to learn sophisticated knowledge and technology, which could better prepares me for my future challenges.
三篇應(yīng)該差不多了吧，大家好好看看吧。
后我來(lái)說(shuō)說(shuō)綜合寫(xiě)作：
這個(gè)其實(shí)面很廣，不好說(shuō)。比如說(shuō)有的是READING中三個(gè)論點(diǎn)非常明顯，然后LECTURE 中再來(lái)三個(gè)論點(diǎn)，要么SUPPORT 要么OPPOSE。這類(lèi)的綜合寫(xiě)作相對(duì)來(lái)說(shuō)是比較好寫(xiě)的，比BARRON，DELTA 上的綜合寫(xiě)作都要好寫(xiě)。大家可以用高分120寫(xiě)作，上面基本上是這一類(lèi)的。我只有IBT考試經(jīng)驗(yàn)，我考的時(shí)候就是這一類(lèi)的，但是至于是不是所有的考試都是這一類(lèi)的，我就不好說(shuō)了。 所以大家還是好把每一類(lèi)的都寫(xiě)寫(xiě)，重點(diǎn)可以放在我剛才講的那一類(lèi)上。
下面附上一篇我考試前一天晚上寫(xiě)的這一類(lèi)的文章（高分120上的關(guān)于馬可波羅的）
In this set of materials, the reading passage discusses reasons that seem to show that Marco Polo never made it to China, while in the lecture, the professor argues that she thinks Marco Polo did go to China and gives her reasons.
The first point made in the reading passage is that the fact that Marco Polo never picked up any Chinese and his reference to Chinese locations are borrowed from Persian language demonstrates that he did not arrive at China. However in the listening passage, while the professor confirms the fact, she argues that the borrowing of names from Persian is reasonable because the Persian region is what connects Asia and Europe in the past.
The second point made in the reading passage is that Marco Polo never mentioned tea and teahouse in China in his books. Therefore it's not likely that he did come to China. But the professor says at that time in China, tea and teahouse were only popular in Southern China. Since Marco Polo spent most of his time in Northern China, it is not a surprise that he did not mention tea and teahouse in his book.
The third point made in the reading passage is that there is no records in China as to whether or not Marco Polo served at the court of the Mongol ruler. The professor explains that it might be because he was referred to by a different name because at that time in China, some court record didn't use real names,or the record about him was lost.
后再給大家一點(diǎn)建議： 綜合不要寫(xiě)得太長(zhǎng)，題目上說(shuō)要225字，我覺(jué)得超出一點(diǎn)沒(méi)有關(guān)系，但是保持在260字以?xún)?nèi)好，曾經(jīng)有一個(gè)哥們寫(xiě)了400多字結(jié)果只有一個(gè)FAIR，我覺(jué)得原因是他把READING 中的話(huà)大段大段的抄在了自己作文上。這點(diǎn)大家一定要慎重！ READING 可以抄，一兩句話(huà)即可，抄上中心思想，重點(diǎn)意思就OK 了。當(dāng)然自己歸納也是可行的。終于寫(xiě)玩了，我也要安心準(zhǔn)備GRE了。祝大家也祝我自己好運(yùn)。BYE！
INTEGRATED: 寫(xiě)了260多個(gè)字，不多，不過(guò)我認(rèn)為每一點(diǎn)都很到位。不過(guò)可惜的是，我實(shí)在是不記得自己寫(xiě)的啥了?；蛟S有補(bǔ)償?shù)霓k法：考試前寫(xiě)過(guò)一篇類(lèi)似的，從思路，寫(xiě)作方式，到整體結(jié)構(gòu)都應(yīng)該和我考試時(shí)寫(xiě)的大同小異，我要花時(shí)間找找，然后傳在這里，給大家講一講。
INDEPENDENT：寫(xiě)了472 個(gè)字（記得很清楚 呵呵）。同樣很遺憾，實(shí)在時(shí)記不起自己寫(xiě)過(guò)什么了，但是當(dāng)時(shí)寫(xiě)這篇文章的狀態(tài)和考前沖刺時(shí)的狀態(tài)一模一樣，思想源源不斷，根本不愁沒(méi)有寫(xiě)的。所以我考前沖刺寫(xiě)的文章應(yīng)該是有價(jià)值的?！ ?BR> 這里我要詳細(xì)講，相信大家也很期望吧， 呵呵不要著急。講之前，我想征求一下大家的意見(jiàn)， 我有幾種方式：
1 我介紹一下我的準(zhǔn)備過(guò)程，及怎樣才能將一個(gè)IC 一步一步的展開(kāi)，后成為一篇文章。
2 我自己在準(zhǔn)備的時(shí)候?qū)戇^(guò)N篇練習(xí)文，大家是要我全部上傳呢？ 還是挑幾篇我認(rèn)為有代表性的給大家好好剖析一下？
3 我可以幫大家分析幾個(gè)IC，通過(guò)我的分析我相信能幫大家打開(kāi)思路，這是我認(rèn)為準(zhǔn)備TOEFL作文重要也是另很多人頭疼的東西了，N 多次看見(jiàn)有人說(shuō)寫(xiě)作些不出來(lái)東西，其實(shí)這些都是中國(guó)過(guò)于集中式思維教育的結(jié)果，發(fā)散式的思維是寫(xiě)一篇好文章的基礎(chǔ)（包括GRE作文）。通過(guò)對(duì)IC展開(kāi)，我相信大家在這方面會(huì)有進(jìn)步的。
后我不想過(guò)于的說(shuō)太多我的想法，用法，句法，畢竟說(shuō)太多會(huì)讓大家有迷惑性，我想告訴大家一種思維方式和模式，然后大家就可以創(chuàng)造出自己獨(dú)有的源源不斷的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容了。（我需要一些時(shí)間整理自己的文章，請(qǐng)大家耐心等待，我會(huì)以快速度完成的，明天又是一天滿(mǎn)課...哎!) 以上三種方式大家認(rèn)為如何? 如果有更好的意見(jiàn)請(qǐng)及時(shí)回饋，畢竟我沒(méi)有太多的時(shí)間啊， 呵呵。
INDEPENDENT 部分是大多數(shù)人的難題，原因是因?yàn)楹芏嗳硕颊也坏皆?huà)說(shuō)，這個(gè)問(wèn)題在我身上也出現(xiàn)過(guò)，我剛開(kāi)始準(zhǔn)備寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候基本上要用45分鐘左右才能寫(xiě)完一篇文章（字?jǐn)?shù)300左右徘徊）。一直到考前20天左右我都還有這個(gè)毛病。更有的時(shí)候是東西在自己的腦子里，可是就是不知道怎樣把它寫(xiě)出來(lái)，一個(gè)句子翻來(lái)覆去的寫(xiě)，結(jié)果時(shí)間就這么浪費(fèi)掉了。相信這個(gè)是大多數(shù)人的通病吧。
為了引出我的內(nèi)容，首先我來(lái)講講模板問(wèn)題：
我認(rèn)為背模板不要背得很詳細(xì)，那樣對(duì)思想的禁錮很大。對(duì)以后自己思路的形成不利。但是我不能說(shuō)我沒(méi)有模板，我的模板就是：
開(kāi)頭：IC SENTENCE, 開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，沒(méi)有必要太磨嘰（也可以通過(guò)一兩句話(huà)來(lái)引出自己的TS）。 但是TS 在第一段，我建議，一定要出現(xiàn)。這樣會(huì)讓閱讀人很容易進(jìn)入狀態(tài)找到突破口。當(dāng)然也可以不用非要在第一段亮出自己的TS，不過(guò)這種情況下要對(duì)閱卷人形成好的印象需要非常好的ORGANIZATION。第一段也可以擺出自己每段的分論點(diǎn)，也可以不用（如果你覺(jué)得第一段有分論點(diǎn)，而每段開(kāi)頭又有分論點(diǎn)會(huì)造成重復(fù)的話(huà)，可以選擇不用）。
然后：緊接著THREE/TWO 段分論點(diǎn)，用來(lái)支持自己的TS。
后：再次扣回主題（避免單一的重復(fù)第一段）。
也許很多人都會(huì)想我在說(shuō)廢話(huà)，但是這個(gè)的的確確就是我的模板。（不信的話(huà)請(qǐng)閱讀我上傳的文章，沒(méi)有任何一篇不是按照這個(gè)思路來(lái)的，但是每一篇都不用固定的網(wǎng)上那種模板寫(xiě)出來(lái)的）。請(qǐng)大家認(rèn)真想一想，這個(gè)是作文的主導(dǎo)思想??！
剛才說(shuō)的是結(jié)構(gòu)問(wèn)題，現(xiàn)在來(lái)談?wù)務(wù)Z言。在語(yǔ)言上我從來(lái)都沒(méi)有背過(guò)任何一個(gè)句型，全部是自己的語(yǔ)言組織起來(lái)的！這可能在某一個(gè)層面上揭示出一個(gè)問(wèn)題，TOEFL 作文不需要太高深需要人思考很久才能看懂的句子！所以大家慎用在GRE 上背來(lái)的超長(zhǎng)，超難的句子。另外我在語(yǔ)言上對(duì)自己有的一個(gè)要求，那就是要用得NATIVE 即AMERICAN STYLE。這個(gè)其實(shí)我也不好說(shuō)，因?yàn)槭且环N久而久之的感覺(jué)吧。我的建議是不要在自己的腦子里想出一串自己以為很妙的中文句子，然后翻譯出來(lái)。這個(gè)做法導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果是90%情況下你翻譯出來(lái)的句子是“四不像”，既沒(méi)有中國(guó)的韻味，也不符合美國(guó)人的閱讀習(xí)慣?？上攵?，閱讀人是不會(huì)APPRECIATE這樣的句子的。大家盡量用英文去想，慢慢練習(xí)。
NOW，講講怎樣講打開(kāi)自己的思維：
這個(gè)完全歸功于高分120。 這本書(shū)我從圖書(shū)館借的，已經(jīng)還了，所以具體它講的什么我忘了，可是我卻永遠(yuǎn)忘不了我體會(huì)出來(lái)的精髓！其實(shí)嚴(yán)格的說(shuō)我就看了5頁(yè)，用了1個(gè)小時(shí)，這5頁(yè)是作者就一個(gè)IC 用了十個(gè)不同的段落去寫(xiě)。（而我們卻為了寫(xiě)一個(gè)而發(fā)愁）?？次乙院?，我仔細(xì)分析了一下，作者說(shuō)的話(huà)都是當(dāng)初在我腦子里有的話(huà)，只是我急于找一個(gè)PERFECT POINT 去展開(kāi)，而把它們?nèi)縋ASS 掉了，可是那個(gè)作者確確實(shí)實(shí)將我PASS掉的東西寫(xiě)出了10段不同而且又都很不錯(cuò)的SUPPORTING PARAGRAPH。（相信很多人有這種體會(huì)吧，腦子里有東西，卻總是在猶豫自己到底要不要寫(xiě)？）
于是我的所得：思想有多遠(yuǎn)，你就寫(xiě)多遠(yuǎn)，跟著自己的思想走?。ó?dāng)然要于自己的TS 有關(guān)） 請(qǐng)大家花個(gè)幾分鐘好好體會(huì)一下這句話(huà)，這并不是我所能傳授的一種很CONCRETE 的東西，這句話(huà)太ABSTRACT 了，我并不奢望大家都能一下子有所感覺(jué)，但是希望大家在練習(xí)的時(shí)候會(huì)對(duì)這句話(huà)有更多的體會(huì)。 我也是在不斷的練習(xí)中慢慢深化這個(gè)理念的。
用這個(gè)思想我來(lái)給大家一個(gè)EXAMPLE 吧：
IC: Pets should be treated as family members
首先確定自己的立場(chǎng)，大概估計(jì)一下自己在那一方面的話(huà)比較多，正、反、還是中立。選好后刻在你腦子里，免得偏題。
我的立場(chǎng)： Yes, they should be treated as family memebers.
很明顯選擇這個(gè)立場(chǎng)就是要選擇PETS 對(duì)我們有利的地方，不然的話(huà)誰(shuí)要它?。∮谑遣煌５膯?wèn)自己，PETS 對(duì)我們有什么好處呢？ 首先PETS 都有什么樣的呢？ 第一個(gè)出現(xiàn)在我腦子里的是狗。那么狗對(duì)我們有什么好處呢？ 人類(lèi)忠實(shí)的朋友。但是怎么繼續(xù)呢？養(yǎng)過(guò)狗的人體會(huì)深刻，可以把自己和狗的相處講出來(lái)，沒(méi)養(yǎng)過(guò)的難道就不能編一段自己與狗相處的日子嗎？ 于是我編了一段：小的時(shí)候家里養(yǎng)的狗是我的玩伴，給我?guī)?lái)了快樂(lè)。狗還有什么好處呢？大家還在什么情況下聽(tīng)過(guò)狗呢？ 導(dǎo)盲犬聽(tīng)過(guò)吧，它們具體工作是什么呢？ 這下你有得寫(xiě)了吧，這個(gè)可以寫(xiě)上幾大段都不重復(fù)，導(dǎo)盲犬幫助盲人領(lǐng)路，于是盲人可以自己出巡不用請(qǐng)個(gè)小保姆照顧，它們知道車(chē)來(lái)了要停，走盲道，甚至有的狗可以幫人開(kāi)門(mén)！ 不管它們能否做這些事，寫(xiě)上去再說(shuō)（當(dāng)然不要太離譜，它們可不會(huì)飛）。再想想平時(shí)什么地方狗多呢？ 公園里??！ 老年人大清早出來(lái)散狗，晚上吃完飯還要散，說(shuō)明什么呢？ 說(shuō)明他們?cè)诰裆蠈?duì)狗有依賴(lài)性啊，兒女外出打工，工作，一年難得回來(lái)幾回，狗自然而然可以擔(dān)當(dāng)這個(gè)DUTY了，甚至還有些老人沒(méi)有兒女，于是它們把自己的PETS 當(dāng)成自己的兒女了。有些地方還有什么狗的各種各樣的比賽，這些比賽得獎(jiǎng)了是對(duì)家庭的一種榮譽(yù)，沒(méi)得獎(jiǎng)大家也在一起HAPPY 了一下啊......等等等等。大家要不停的問(wèn)自己，出現(xiàn)了思想，不要覺(jué)得太膚淺而PASS掉，多聯(lián)想一下，思路不是你一開(kāi)始分析IC 的時(shí)候就完成的，有的時(shí)候你在寫(xiě)的時(shí)候，思路會(huì)源源不斷的涌出，這個(gè)時(shí)候說(shuō)明你初得要領(lǐng)了。
現(xiàn)在奉上我寫(xiě)的一篇關(guān)于這個(gè)IC的文章：
Pets are universal all over the world. People in different countries have pets. I have been wondering why it is so common for us to have pets? Well, they are apparently our friends. Sometimes they are great helpers. And to some people, they are important family members.
Pets can be friends with which we can live and spend time. I used to have a pet dog when I was very young. It's the only friend I have because Mom and Dad used to be too busy with their work to spend time with me. The only way that I could have fun was to play with my pet. We used to race, swim, and even sleep together. It has a unique position in my childhood memory, because it made my earlier years so much fun instead of being lonely and miserable.
Pets are not merely animals that serve the purpose of making fun for us as someone would think. Instead they have their position in this society that is irreplaceable. They are important helpers to the disabled. For example, some dogs can lead the way for the blind. They know which would be the safe path to go, and they know when to stop if a car passes by. They have made the lives of the blind much easier because these people can go outside themselves. Besides leading the way, some pets can even open the door for people who could not stand up right to do it. I can't imagine what their life would be without these aid pets.
Pets can also serve as a psychological comfort for the old. It's quite common to see the old walk their dogs in nearby parks early in the morning and evening. These people need someone to be with all the time. But their children have their own lives and it's not possible for them to be with their parents all the time. Therefore this duty is taken by these pets. Some old people who don't have any children even treat these pets as their children.
Pets are different than other wild animals,. They play a more important role in our lives in some way. They make us happy and help us. So if we decide to have a pet in our family, we should also be prepared to treat it as a family member in return for the benefits it brings us.
讀過(guò)這篇文章會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，并沒(méi)有什么閃光句型或者詞語(yǔ)，文采一般，但是我考試時(shí)的作文也不會(huì)比這個(gè)高到那里去。這個(gè)是我剛有體會(huì)時(shí)早期的寫(xiě)作，大家初步分析，并試著自己就一個(gè)IC 分析分析看。呆會(huì)我會(huì)再來(lái)再給大家分析幾個(gè)IC，并附上我的寫(xiě)作。大家千萬(wàn)不要試著模仿我的用詞用句，就像我說(shuō)的，都很簡(jiǎn)單，每個(gè)人都會(huì)，關(guān)鍵看看文章的思路和思想。 如文章有不妥之處，大家敬請(qǐng)指出，我們共同進(jìn)步。
IC:it is more important to work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn a lot of money
I disagree with the statement that it is more important to work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn a lot of money. Making a lot of money means having more opportunities. Therefore it is more beneficial to me than simply taking a job that I enjoy.
At this current situation where we are suffering from this global economic downturn, what concerns me the most is whether or not I can live through this hard time, whether or not I will be able to support my family. Therefore I definitely want a job that I can make more money because it meets my most urgent requirement. Enjoyment would be negligible when compared with livelihood.
Making a lot of money will also lead to more happiness than the joy you get from taking a job you like. For example, if I am a millionaire, not only can I provide my families a decent living, but also I can have excess money so that I can donate to the poorer people. I think the overall happiness of the poor getting aid would overmount the happy feeling I myself get. In this sense, taking a job that I enjoy rather than a job with a decent pay would be a little more selfish.
Finally, having high payment job doesn't necessarily mean that I will lose the chance to do the job that I enjoy. I can certainly consider doing the job that I enjoy after I save a certain amount of money. This strong economic foundation will reduce a lot of my concerns, therefore I can do the job that I like more freely and I will end up enjoying the job more. Besides this benefit, a strong economic ability also makes it possible for me to enjoy a lot more things. Then, maybe the job that I once considered interesting will not be that fun anymore.
While some people may argue that this stance is too realistic or materialistic, I want to remind everyone that we, as human beings, have more obligations that we need to fulfill. A high payment job will make these a lot easier to meet. What's more, it also will offer us opportunities. So payment will be my number one concern when i choose a job.
IC：Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society.Choose another technological innovation that you think is important.
Although internet came into being about 2 decades ago, it has changed the way we live much more than the last 200 years. Its influence on business, communication and information is so profound that people now simply can't live without it.
Based on the development of internet, a lot of new types of business ranging from international conglomerate to regional small online shops are also established. The most famous internet based international conglomerate would be Google. Companies like this basically do not sell products but their service. This changed the traditional way of doing business which always involved some concrete products sell to people. Internet opens a cyber world in which a huge market is untapped. Besides large companies, internet also prospers small businesses. For example, local stores can do their business online. All they have to do is to create a website of their own and all customers need to do is to go to their websites and order what they want. Then they just need wait at home for the products they just purchased to be delivered. This way, we never need to worry about the traditional exhausting shopping.
Internet also fundamentally changed the way people communicate. There are a lot of chatting programs, such as MSN, YAHOO MESSENGER, SKYPE, that make it possible for people from different parts of the world to have a conversation with each other as long as everyone has access to internet. They even provide audio and video services meaning not only people can chat, but also they can hear and see each other. Besides that, what really makes them appealing is that they don't charge us for doing these things. These advantages definitely surpass the service that mobile phone provides us.
Internet is also like a huge tank that can contain almost infinite information. A search has shown that right now the information that internet can provide us exceeds any library in the world and some even argue that it has more information than all the libraries in total. I certainly wouldn't doubt that. I use internet to search for a lot of information. Whenever I have an project to finish, the first thing I do is to go to the internet to find relevant materials.
There is no doubt that internet has had a fundamental change on our everyday life. Though there are many problems that accompany with it, we can't deny that internet is one of the most innovations in human history.
IC:You are planning to study abroad.What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience?Why?
Studying abroad is becoming more and more popular among college students. It not only provides us opportunity to learn sophisticated technology and knowledge but also gives us chances to experience different cultures and life. However the fact that it will get me away from my family and friends for a long time is a bother to me.
One of the major reasons that I want to study abroad is to acquire state of the art technology in a particular field. Now I am majoring electrical engineering, and I want to get further education in this field as a post graduate. However electrical engineering is not as well developed in my own nation as it is in the US. So in order to be an expert in this field and to follow my personal interest, studying abroad is a very good option. This way I can always have access to valuable knowledge as well as keep myself in the frontier in electrical engineering.
Besides getting technical knowledge, studying abroad is also a chance for me to learn about different culture. It's quite obvious that life in another country would be totally different from that of my own. First of all, I have to speak their language so that I can interact with other people. Secondly, I have to adjust myself to their way of thinking, and way of dealing with people, in other words, social skills. Finally I would also acquaint myself with a variety of new things that simply don't exist in my home country. For example, American football is not that popular in China, but if I study in America and I want to have topic with other students, I think what I will have to do is to force myself to watch it, least of all, get to know it a little bit. These experiences would be very valuable since you can not get them anywhere else but this particular country.
While I experience new culture I would certainly miss things and people traditional in my own country. Studying abroad is a long-term investment. I might be away from home for a year or maybe even two years, which means that I will not be able to see my families and friends for that long time. Without doubt, I will miss them a lot, and sometimes this miss might be so intense that I simply can't deal with it. What's more I will miss the traditional foods so much as well. I never expect that I can find the similar flavor of those foods in another country. So that poses me another problem of studying abroad.
Despite all these disadvantages, I still prefer to study abroad. Because after all, my ultimate goal is to learn sophisticated knowledge and technology, which could better prepares me for my future challenges.
三篇應(yīng)該差不多了吧，大家好好看看吧。
后我來(lái)說(shuō)說(shuō)綜合寫(xiě)作：
這個(gè)其實(shí)面很廣，不好說(shuō)。比如說(shuō)有的是READING中三個(gè)論點(diǎn)非常明顯，然后LECTURE 中再來(lái)三個(gè)論點(diǎn)，要么SUPPORT 要么OPPOSE。這類(lèi)的綜合寫(xiě)作相對(duì)來(lái)說(shuō)是比較好寫(xiě)的，比BARRON，DELTA 上的綜合寫(xiě)作都要好寫(xiě)。大家可以用高分120寫(xiě)作，上面基本上是這一類(lèi)的。我只有IBT考試經(jīng)驗(yàn)，我考的時(shí)候就是這一類(lèi)的，但是至于是不是所有的考試都是這一類(lèi)的，我就不好說(shuō)了。 所以大家還是好把每一類(lèi)的都寫(xiě)寫(xiě)，重點(diǎn)可以放在我剛才講的那一類(lèi)上。
下面附上一篇我考試前一天晚上寫(xiě)的這一類(lèi)的文章（高分120上的關(guān)于馬可波羅的）
In this set of materials, the reading passage discusses reasons that seem to show that Marco Polo never made it to China, while in the lecture, the professor argues that she thinks Marco Polo did go to China and gives her reasons.
The first point made in the reading passage is that the fact that Marco Polo never picked up any Chinese and his reference to Chinese locations are borrowed from Persian language demonstrates that he did not arrive at China. However in the listening passage, while the professor confirms the fact, she argues that the borrowing of names from Persian is reasonable because the Persian region is what connects Asia and Europe in the past.
The second point made in the reading passage is that Marco Polo never mentioned tea and teahouse in China in his books. Therefore it's not likely that he did come to China. But the professor says at that time in China, tea and teahouse were only popular in Southern China. Since Marco Polo spent most of his time in Northern China, it is not a surprise that he did not mention tea and teahouse in his book.
The third point made in the reading passage is that there is no records in China as to whether or not Marco Polo served at the court of the Mongol ruler. The professor explains that it might be because he was referred to by a different name because at that time in China, some court record didn't use real names,or the record about him was lost.
后再給大家一點(diǎn)建議： 綜合不要寫(xiě)得太長(zhǎng)，題目上說(shuō)要225字，我覺(jué)得超出一點(diǎn)沒(méi)有關(guān)系，但是保持在260字以?xún)?nèi)好，曾經(jīng)有一個(gè)哥們寫(xiě)了400多字結(jié)果只有一個(gè)FAIR，我覺(jué)得原因是他把READING 中的話(huà)大段大段的抄在了自己作文上。這點(diǎn)大家一定要慎重！ READING 可以抄，一兩句話(huà)即可，抄上中心思想，重點(diǎn)意思就OK 了。當(dāng)然自己歸納也是可行的。終于寫(xiě)玩了，我也要安心準(zhǔn)備GRE了。祝大家也祝我自己好運(yùn)。BYE！