示例2:I entered the room saw mother sit there wait for me come back.
分析:這里有5個動詞,都沒有標記邏輯關系,錯誤!通過分析,我們看到:entered和saw可以并列,因為它們擁有共同的1(I);sit和wait可以并列,因為它們擁有共同的1(mother),但這兩組動詞之間就不能再并列了,因為無法這么做。這就意味著:這句話里的動詞有的可以并列,而有的不可以。
示例3:I opened the bag took out some paper and a pen, sat down started take notes.
分析:opened,took out,sat down,started這四個動詞擁有共同的1(I),而且都是1直接行使或發(fā)出的動作,所以,可以采取并列關系;但take因為有個過渡層,因此并列處理不合適。
2.從屬關系示例
示例1:I sat down beside her said nothing.
分析:動詞關系混亂,假如想確保said,則需要犧牲后面,如:
I sat down beside her, saying nothing.
假如確保后面,則犧牲前面:
Sitting down beside her, I said nothing.
示例2:To quit smoking, I eat candies.
一個句子一個句號原則
理論上講,一個句子一個句號,但是,實際中會有幾個甚至多個句子擺放在一起共享一個句號。此時應該怎么辦呢?
答案很簡單:標記清楚這些句子間的邏輯關系。有兩種:
1.并列關系示例
示例1:I sat down beside her. I said nothing.
變?yōu)椋篒 sat down beside her and I said nothing.
示例2:He asked me a question. I answered him.
變?yōu)椋篐e asked me a question and I answered him.
2.從屬關系
1)運用各類從句,形成主從符合句,包括:
狀語從句
賓語從句
定語從句
主語從句
同位語從句
2)運用非謂語動詞類進行從屬方式的處理,包括:
動詞的ing形式
動詞的過去分詞形式
動詞不定式形式
從屬關系示例(以狀語從句為例)
示例1:When he asked me a question, I answered him.
示例2:I was so angry that I beat him up!
示例3:If you ask me ‘why’, I will answer ‘because’!
示例4:Since you are not feeling well, just lie down and take a good rest.
示例5:Although I have tried my best, I can’t win her heart.
示例6:Wherever I am, I will be thinking of you.
示例7:I went out very early in the morning so that I could avoid the rush hour traffic.
分析:這里有5個動詞,都沒有標記邏輯關系,錯誤!通過分析,我們看到:entered和saw可以并列,因為它們擁有共同的1(I);sit和wait可以并列,因為它們擁有共同的1(mother),但這兩組動詞之間就不能再并列了,因為無法這么做。這就意味著:這句話里的動詞有的可以并列,而有的不可以。
示例3:I opened the bag took out some paper and a pen, sat down started take notes.
分析:opened,took out,sat down,started這四個動詞擁有共同的1(I),而且都是1直接行使或發(fā)出的動作,所以,可以采取并列關系;但take因為有個過渡層,因此并列處理不合適。
2.從屬關系示例
示例1:I sat down beside her said nothing.
分析:動詞關系混亂,假如想確保said,則需要犧牲后面,如:
I sat down beside her, saying nothing.
假如確保后面,則犧牲前面:
Sitting down beside her, I said nothing.
示例2:To quit smoking, I eat candies.
一個句子一個句號原則
理論上講,一個句子一個句號,但是,實際中會有幾個甚至多個句子擺放在一起共享一個句號。此時應該怎么辦呢?
答案很簡單:標記清楚這些句子間的邏輯關系。有兩種:
1.并列關系示例
示例1:I sat down beside her. I said nothing.
變?yōu)椋篒 sat down beside her and I said nothing.
示例2:He asked me a question. I answered him.
變?yōu)椋篐e asked me a question and I answered him.
2.從屬關系
1)運用各類從句,形成主從符合句,包括:
狀語從句
賓語從句
定語從句
主語從句
同位語從句
2)運用非謂語動詞類進行從屬方式的處理,包括:
動詞的ing形式
動詞的過去分詞形式
動詞不定式形式
從屬關系示例(以狀語從句為例)
示例1:When he asked me a question, I answered him.
示例2:I was so angry that I beat him up!
示例3:If you ask me ‘why’, I will answer ‘because’!
示例4:Since you are not feeling well, just lie down and take a good rest.
示例5:Although I have tried my best, I can’t win her heart.
示例6:Wherever I am, I will be thinking of you.
示例7:I went out very early in the morning so that I could avoid the rush hour traffic.