比較型作文之11分作文
比較型作文一般分為說明式比較和議論式比較兩種。說明式比較在比較過程中，作者不發(fā)表個人意見，在文中不體現(xiàn)個人取向，單純以說明介紹為目的。在四、六級考試中的比較型作文多以議論式比較的形式出現(xiàn)。議論式比較以比較事物優(yōu)劣、闡明自己立場為目的，一般分為傾向型和中立型兩種類型。11分作文只是在8分作文的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行改進(jìn)，通過篇章的連貫、句型的優(yōu)化來實現(xiàn)。
一、連貫性
連貫性是寫作的一個重要原則。句子之間的鏈接主要通過銜接詞的使用體現(xiàn)連貫性，根據(jù)過渡銜接詞在篇章中的作用，可分為引介詞、承接詞和總結(jié)詞三大類：
1. 引介詞在篇章中擔(dān)當(dāng)引出話題或觀點的作用，根據(jù)其本身的含義，可細(xì)分如下：
（1）時間詞（組）：nowadays,at present,recently,now ,lately,in some cases;
（2）一般觀點詞（組）：in general,generally,generally spraking,as we know,as is known to all,as is generally accepted,regarding,concerning,as for... as to ..., as regards;
（3）個人觀點詞（組）：firstly,first of all ,in the firest place, to begin with , to start with , for one thing, as for me, in my opinion, on the one hand;
2.承接詞在篇章中承接主題句或上一個支持句，可表遞進(jìn)或轉(zhuǎn)折，根據(jù)其本身的含義，可分如下：
純粹承接詞：second(ly),third(ly),for another,on the other hand;
遞進(jìn)承接詞：besides,in addition, in addition to ,furthermore,moreover,namely;
并列承接詞：meanwhile,at the same time;
原因承接詞：because,for , as, in that,owing to,due to ,on accout of,on the groud of , as a result of;
比較承接詞：equally important,similarly,likewise,in the same way,in common;
對比承接詞：on the contrary, in contrast , by contrast , whereas,instead, conversely;
強調(diào)承接詞：in paricular, paricularly,most important of all,needless to say,especially,above all,on top of all this;
轉(zhuǎn)折讓步承接詞：although,though,nevertheless, however,but,yet , admittedly, it is true... but, in spite of , even though, granted that , despite, in spite of , unfortunately,nonetheless;
總結(jié)詞在篇章中推出結(jié)論和后果：
(1) 結(jié)果詞：thus , consequently,hence, therefore, accordingly,as a consequence, for this reason;
(2) 總結(jié)詞：in a word, all in all ,to sum up, briefly,in brief,in short,in summary,undoubtedly,by and large , as has been noted.
具有相似意義和功能的銜接詞在上下文可以靈活替換。
二、常用句型
1、首段常用句型：
Nowadays,there are two ways to do..., such as A and B.
It is widely accepted / an undeniable fact that...
Some people prefer A... while others...
There used to be a heated discussion over whether A is more important than B.
Those who are in favor of A argue that...
In my point of view, I like a much more than B.
Despite the fact that majority of people tend to / prefer to ... , I'm in favor of...
A and B are of the same / equal importance.While the former ... , the later ....
While I attach much importance to A, I won't give up any chance to do B.
2、主體部分常用句型：
A prides itself / themselves on sth however, its / their ... counterpart / B...
First and foremost, ... what's more,... Last but not least,...
Ranging from ... to ...（用于舉例事物）
When it comes to ... （用于引出話題）
A's merits mean nothing when B's advantages are considered / mentioned
Admittedly, / of course, / True, / It is true that A is..., but B...
However, for the demerits / disadvantages A has , it has the advantage that...
3、結(jié)尾段常用句型：
As a result /For this reason, I like doing...
In spite of the said advantages of A, I will choose B...
Of course,A has its own merits.But I'm still in favor of B.
Therefore,A and B are of equal importance. The former helps to do..., and the latter contributes to...
The secret of ... lies in the combination of both A and B
比較型作文一般分為說明式比較和議論式比較兩種。說明式比較在比較過程中，作者不發(fā)表個人意見，在文中不體現(xiàn)個人取向，單純以說明介紹為目的。在四、六級考試中的比較型作文多以議論式比較的形式出現(xiàn)。議論式比較以比較事物優(yōu)劣、闡明自己立場為目的，一般分為傾向型和中立型兩種類型。11分作文只是在8分作文的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行改進(jìn)，通過篇章的連貫、句型的優(yōu)化來實現(xiàn)。
一、連貫性
連貫性是寫作的一個重要原則。句子之間的鏈接主要通過銜接詞的使用體現(xiàn)連貫性，根據(jù)過渡銜接詞在篇章中的作用，可分為引介詞、承接詞和總結(jié)詞三大類：
1. 引介詞在篇章中擔(dān)當(dāng)引出話題或觀點的作用，根據(jù)其本身的含義，可細(xì)分如下：
（1）時間詞（組）：nowadays,at present,recently,now ,lately,in some cases;
（2）一般觀點詞（組）：in general,generally,generally spraking,as we know,as is known to all,as is generally accepted,regarding,concerning,as for... as to ..., as regards;
（3）個人觀點詞（組）：firstly,first of all ,in the firest place, to begin with , to start with , for one thing, as for me, in my opinion, on the one hand;
2.承接詞在篇章中承接主題句或上一個支持句，可表遞進(jìn)或轉(zhuǎn)折，根據(jù)其本身的含義，可分如下：
純粹承接詞：second(ly),third(ly),for another,on the other hand;
遞進(jìn)承接詞：besides,in addition, in addition to ,furthermore,moreover,namely;
并列承接詞：meanwhile,at the same time;
原因承接詞：because,for , as, in that,owing to,due to ,on accout of,on the groud of , as a result of;
比較承接詞：equally important,similarly,likewise,in the same way,in common;
對比承接詞：on the contrary, in contrast , by contrast , whereas,instead, conversely;
強調(diào)承接詞：in paricular, paricularly,most important of all,needless to say,especially,above all,on top of all this;
轉(zhuǎn)折讓步承接詞：although,though,nevertheless, however,but,yet , admittedly, it is true... but, in spite of , even though, granted that , despite, in spite of , unfortunately,nonetheless;
總結(jié)詞在篇章中推出結(jié)論和后果：
(1) 結(jié)果詞：thus , consequently,hence, therefore, accordingly,as a consequence, for this reason;
(2) 總結(jié)詞：in a word, all in all ,to sum up, briefly,in brief,in short,in summary,undoubtedly,by and large , as has been noted.
具有相似意義和功能的銜接詞在上下文可以靈活替換。
二、常用句型
1、首段常用句型：
Nowadays,there are two ways to do..., such as A and B.
It is widely accepted / an undeniable fact that...
Some people prefer A... while others...
There used to be a heated discussion over whether A is more important than B.
Those who are in favor of A argue that...
In my point of view, I like a much more than B.
Despite the fact that majority of people tend to / prefer to ... , I'm in favor of...
A and B are of the same / equal importance.While the former ... , the later ....
While I attach much importance to A, I won't give up any chance to do B.
2、主體部分常用句型：
A prides itself / themselves on sth however, its / their ... counterpart / B...
First and foremost, ... what's more,... Last but not least,...
Ranging from ... to ...（用于舉例事物）
When it comes to ... （用于引出話題）
A's merits mean nothing when B's advantages are considered / mentioned
Admittedly, / of course, / True, / It is true that A is..., but B...
However, for the demerits / disadvantages A has , it has the advantage that...
3、結(jié)尾段常用句型：
As a result /For this reason, I like doing...
In spite of the said advantages of A, I will choose B...
Of course,A has its own merits.But I'm still in favor of B.
Therefore,A and B are of equal importance. The former helps to do..., and the latter contributes to...
The secret of ... lies in the combination of both A and B