作業(yè)：（以下為一篇11分范文，請練習按要求改寫成漂亮的14分作文）
(1)"Failure is the mother of success" is a well-known proverb.(2) It teaches us that failure is not a bad thing,and as long as we can learn from the failing experience and cheer up,failure will turn into a stepping-stone to sucess.
要求：句(2)得粗體部分后加入調(diào)節(jié)觀點的詞,變成部分否定
(1)My personal experience is a case in point.(2) I entered for the english speech contest last year and was knocked out in the preliminary contest.(3) Not well prepared either mentally or academically then, my failure was inevitable.(4) However,from my failing experience I knew I had some problems with my pronunciation and I should learn some strategies of making public speech.(5)So in the following year,following the tapes and to imitate the speeches of native speakers I made great effort to improve my pronunciation.(6)I also read some books on public speech and practiced the theories in the discussion of English classes.(7) This year,I entered for the speech contest again.(8)I won the second prize.(9) Without the lesson I learned from last year's failure,I can never succeed this year .My failure last year is the mother of my success this year.
要求：1、糾正句（3）粗體部分垂懸錯文
2、糾正句（5）粗體部分的平行結(jié)構錯誤；
3、在粗體的句（8）前加入一個設問句，承上啟下，并吸引讀者注意。
The truth of the proverb has been proved by countless other facts.(2) so many new things have been invented after the inventor's countless experiments (3) So many masterpieces have been written by writers whose early works were rejected by publishing houses again and again.(4) there fore ,we can safely draw the conclusion that failure is the mother of success .(5) since nobody can avoid failure,we should make failure a stepping-stion to success.
要求：1、將句(4)中的粗體部分用調(diào)節(jié)觀點的詞代替,使語氣更緩和
2、將句（5）中的粗體部分改成設問句，強調(diào)觀點，引起思考
參考答案：
"Failure is the mother of success" is a well-known proverb. It teaches us that failure is not necessarily a bad thing,and as long as we can learn from the failing experience and cheer up,failure will turn into a stepping-stone to sucess.
My personal experience is a case in point. I entered for the english speech contest last year and was knocked out in the preliminary contest.Since I was not well prepared either mentally or academically then, my failure was inevitable. However,from my failing experience I knew I had some problems with my pronunciation and I should learn some strategies of making public speech.So in the following year,following the tapes and imitating the speeches of native speakers I made great effort to improve my pronunciation.I also read some books on public speech and practiced the theories in the discussion of English classes. This year,I entered for the speech contest again.What happened? I won the second prize. Without the lesson I learned from last year's failure,I can never succeed this year .My failure last year is the mother of my success this year.
The truth of the proverb has been proved by countless other facts. so many new things have been invented after the inventor's countless experiments So many masterpieces have been written by writers whose early works were rejected by publishing houses again and again. there fore ,we may safely draw the conclusion that failure is the mother of success . since nobody can avoid failure,why not make failure a stepping-stion to success.
(1)"Failure is the mother of success" is a well-known proverb.(2) It teaches us that failure is not a bad thing,and as long as we can learn from the failing experience and cheer up,failure will turn into a stepping-stone to sucess.
要求：句(2)得粗體部分后加入調(diào)節(jié)觀點的詞,變成部分否定
(1)My personal experience is a case in point.(2) I entered for the english speech contest last year and was knocked out in the preliminary contest.(3) Not well prepared either mentally or academically then, my failure was inevitable.(4) However,from my failing experience I knew I had some problems with my pronunciation and I should learn some strategies of making public speech.(5)So in the following year,following the tapes and to imitate the speeches of native speakers I made great effort to improve my pronunciation.(6)I also read some books on public speech and practiced the theories in the discussion of English classes.(7) This year,I entered for the speech contest again.(8)I won the second prize.(9) Without the lesson I learned from last year's failure,I can never succeed this year .My failure last year is the mother of my success this year.
要求：1、糾正句（3）粗體部分垂懸錯文
2、糾正句（5）粗體部分的平行結(jié)構錯誤；
3、在粗體的句（8）前加入一個設問句，承上啟下，并吸引讀者注意。
The truth of the proverb has been proved by countless other facts.(2) so many new things have been invented after the inventor's countless experiments (3) So many masterpieces have been written by writers whose early works were rejected by publishing houses again and again.(4) there fore ,we can safely draw the conclusion that failure is the mother of success .(5) since nobody can avoid failure,we should make failure a stepping-stion to success.
要求：1、將句(4)中的粗體部分用調(diào)節(jié)觀點的詞代替,使語氣更緩和
2、將句（5）中的粗體部分改成設問句，強調(diào)觀點，引起思考
參考答案：
"Failure is the mother of success" is a well-known proverb. It teaches us that failure is not necessarily a bad thing,and as long as we can learn from the failing experience and cheer up,failure will turn into a stepping-stone to sucess.
My personal experience is a case in point. I entered for the english speech contest last year and was knocked out in the preliminary contest.Since I was not well prepared either mentally or academically then, my failure was inevitable. However,from my failing experience I knew I had some problems with my pronunciation and I should learn some strategies of making public speech.So in the following year,following the tapes and imitating the speeches of native speakers I made great effort to improve my pronunciation.I also read some books on public speech and practiced the theories in the discussion of English classes. This year,I entered for the speech contest again.What happened? I won the second prize. Without the lesson I learned from last year's failure,I can never succeed this year .My failure last year is the mother of my success this year.
The truth of the proverb has been proved by countless other facts. so many new things have been invented after the inventor's countless experiments So many masterpieces have been written by writers whose early works were rejected by publishing houses again and again. there fore ,we may safely draw the conclusion that failure is the mother of success . since nobody can avoid failure,why not make failure a stepping-stion to success.