[例3]
directions:for this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic losing and gaining weight according to the following.your composition should be less than 120 words.remember that the contents of the outline should all be included in your composition.
outline:
the comparison of one‘s body to a car: the similarities and differences of one’s body and one‘s car.
1the ways for gaining weight and losing weight.
2my own practices.
[范文]
losing and gaining weight
the process of gaining or losing weight can be explained by comparing your car. first, your car can‘t run if there is no petrol or diesel oil. because it needs energy. the same thing happens to your body. your body also needs energy, the food you eat can be converted into energy,with which you can run, you can talk, you can do everything. second, if you eat too much you will gain weight. we know a car with too heavy load cant run quickly and safely. maybe it will break down. for the same reason, if you are too fat, it is also very inconvenient and dangerous. you might get heart disease,diabetes, and hypertension and so on. if such things happen, doctor would ask you to lose weight.
you eat too much and you don't take exercise, youll gain weight. so if you want to lose weight you have to do the opposite. you will be on a diet. you will go out and do some exercises, such as, running, swimming, and playing football,etc. soon, youll be back in good condition and good shape again.
as far as i am concerned, i get up and go to bed early, do plenty of exercises everyday, and pay special attention to the food i eat as well. i dont eat too much meat. instead, my diet consists of vegetables, fruits, eggs, fish, and beans. by doing this i can keep fit.
作者在這篇文章中先用比較對比法比較了人與車之間的相似之處:車需要汽油,人需要食物;車載的重物過多跑不快,人長得太胖既行動不便也存有隱患,因而過于肥胖 的人就需要減肥。第一段的最后一句話起了承上啟下的作用。接下來作者談了如何減肥,最后很自然地過渡到作者自己的做法。
第三節(jié)關鍵詞作文
關鍵詞作文是根據(jù)作文題目以及所給出的關鍵詞寫短文。關鍵詞的數(shù)目由幾個到十幾個不等。寫這種題型的作文,要特別注意關鍵詞的作用。關鍵詞是短文內(nèi)容發(fā)展的“路標”,在作文思路和寫作內(nèi)容上起著決定乾坤的作用。因此,寫出的文章要把所給的這些關鍵詞都用上,可以一句中用上幾個詞,也可以幾句中用上一個詞,只要能做到恰到好處即可。而且,要學會根據(jù)所給關鍵詞的語義群分段。如果所給的關鍵詞可以分為三組,那么,短文就可以寫成三段。如果給出的關鍵詞是兩組,短文就可以寫為兩段。再者,要把給出的關鍵詞用在刀刃上,即各段的主題句以及結尾的主題句都應該有關鍵詞。
[例1]directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a passage on “the advantages of travel” based on the words and phrases given: advantages widen our knowledge, make friends, knowledge or geography,beautiful scenery, different lifestyle, customs and cultures, various foods,practice a foreign language,worth spending the time.
[范文]
the advantages of travel
whenever a college student is asked“what are you going to do this summer vacation?”the most probable answer might be“i am going to have a trip.”it seems that college students are fond of traveling very much. why?because travel has numerous advantages.
first of all,travel can widen our knowledge of geography,the knowledge of different customs, cultures and lifestyles of different places and countries. secondly, we can make friends and practice a foreign language through traveling. finally, travel is the best way of spending time. we can enjoy eating various local foods and seeing beautiful scenery.
in a word, we can benefit from travel in more than one way. it is worth spending the time.
作者在第一段中就用上了關鍵詞travel和advantage,并很巧妙地利用because travel has numerous advantages這樣的承上啟下的句子來引出下文關于旅游的種種好處。最后又把關鍵詞用在了文章的結尾處,強化了主題,不失為畫龍點睛之筆。
[例2]directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a passage on“the helpful features of textbooks” based on the following words given: textbooks, school, levels, kids, purpose, learn, therefore, features,information, contentsts,page, understand, divide, sections, finally, alphabetical, mast, help, quickly, efficiently.
[范文]
the helpful features of textbooks
textbooks are books that students use in schools. students at all levels and in all kinds of schools use textbooks. they have certain features in common—features that can help students find and understand the information in them.
all textbooks have tables of contents at the beginning. the tables of contents list the chapter titles, the parts of the chapters,and the page numbers of the parts. these sections are divided again into smaller parts with headings and subheadings. finally, most textbooks have an index at the back of the book. the index lists all the topics in the book in alphabetical order, and gives their page numbers.
these are the features of most textbooks, which help students find and understand the information in textbooks quickly and efficiently.
文章一開頭用定義法給教材下了個定義。接下來具體說明教材的主要特征。最后一段與第一段相呼應,并重復和強調(diào)了幾個關鍵詞中的關鍵詞,比如textbooks,information等。
第四節(jié)圖表作文
圖表作文要求考生用文字材料把圖表中所提供的信息準確、完整地表達出來。在寫作圖表作文時,首先要仔細觀察并分析圖表,以及題中所給出的有關信息,比如,作文題,英文提綱、英文提示、英語關鍵詞等。在分析圖表時,要抓住與主題有關的信息,要發(fā)現(xiàn)數(shù)據(jù)呈現(xiàn)的規(guī)律,要充分利用圖表中的圖形、數(shù)據(jù)等去說明主題。但是注意不要過多地引用數(shù)據(jù),以免造成濫用數(shù)據(jù)的后果。另外,在寫作圖表作文時可以套用一些常用詞匯或表達方式,這將有助于你寫出較為地道的圖表作文。例如:
①as can be seen from the table (graph, form) that……
②from the above table it can be seen (concluded) that……
③a careful study of the table shows that……
④the number (percentage) is 3 times as much as that in 2000.
⑤it has decreased (fell, dropped) about twice, compared with (as compared with, as against) that of 2000.
⑥in 2001, it increased (went up, rose) from 5 to 15 percent of the total (to 15 percent, by 15 percent)。
[例1]directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 100 words on changes in people‘s diet. study the following table carefully and your composition must be based on the information given in the table. write three paragraphs to:
1. state the changes in people‘s diet(飲食)in the past five years
2. give possible reasons for the changes
3. draw your own conclusion
you should quote as few figures as possible.
directions:for this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic losing and gaining weight according to the following.your composition should be less than 120 words.remember that the contents of the outline should all be included in your composition.
outline:
the comparison of one‘s body to a car: the similarities and differences of one’s body and one‘s car.
1the ways for gaining weight and losing weight.
2my own practices.
[范文]
losing and gaining weight
the process of gaining or losing weight can be explained by comparing your car. first, your car can‘t run if there is no petrol or diesel oil. because it needs energy. the same thing happens to your body. your body also needs energy, the food you eat can be converted into energy,with which you can run, you can talk, you can do everything. second, if you eat too much you will gain weight. we know a car with too heavy load cant run quickly and safely. maybe it will break down. for the same reason, if you are too fat, it is also very inconvenient and dangerous. you might get heart disease,diabetes, and hypertension and so on. if such things happen, doctor would ask you to lose weight.
you eat too much and you don't take exercise, youll gain weight. so if you want to lose weight you have to do the opposite. you will be on a diet. you will go out and do some exercises, such as, running, swimming, and playing football,etc. soon, youll be back in good condition and good shape again.
as far as i am concerned, i get up and go to bed early, do plenty of exercises everyday, and pay special attention to the food i eat as well. i dont eat too much meat. instead, my diet consists of vegetables, fruits, eggs, fish, and beans. by doing this i can keep fit.
作者在這篇文章中先用比較對比法比較了人與車之間的相似之處:車需要汽油,人需要食物;車載的重物過多跑不快,人長得太胖既行動不便也存有隱患,因而過于肥胖 的人就需要減肥。第一段的最后一句話起了承上啟下的作用。接下來作者談了如何減肥,最后很自然地過渡到作者自己的做法。
第三節(jié)關鍵詞作文
關鍵詞作文是根據(jù)作文題目以及所給出的關鍵詞寫短文。關鍵詞的數(shù)目由幾個到十幾個不等。寫這種題型的作文,要特別注意關鍵詞的作用。關鍵詞是短文內(nèi)容發(fā)展的“路標”,在作文思路和寫作內(nèi)容上起著決定乾坤的作用。因此,寫出的文章要把所給的這些關鍵詞都用上,可以一句中用上幾個詞,也可以幾句中用上一個詞,只要能做到恰到好處即可。而且,要學會根據(jù)所給關鍵詞的語義群分段。如果所給的關鍵詞可以分為三組,那么,短文就可以寫成三段。如果給出的關鍵詞是兩組,短文就可以寫為兩段。再者,要把給出的關鍵詞用在刀刃上,即各段的主題句以及結尾的主題句都應該有關鍵詞。
[例1]directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a passage on “the advantages of travel” based on the words and phrases given: advantages widen our knowledge, make friends, knowledge or geography,beautiful scenery, different lifestyle, customs and cultures, various foods,practice a foreign language,worth spending the time.
[范文]
the advantages of travel
whenever a college student is asked“what are you going to do this summer vacation?”the most probable answer might be“i am going to have a trip.”it seems that college students are fond of traveling very much. why?because travel has numerous advantages.
first of all,travel can widen our knowledge of geography,the knowledge of different customs, cultures and lifestyles of different places and countries. secondly, we can make friends and practice a foreign language through traveling. finally, travel is the best way of spending time. we can enjoy eating various local foods and seeing beautiful scenery.
in a word, we can benefit from travel in more than one way. it is worth spending the time.
作者在第一段中就用上了關鍵詞travel和advantage,并很巧妙地利用because travel has numerous advantages這樣的承上啟下的句子來引出下文關于旅游的種種好處。最后又把關鍵詞用在了文章的結尾處,強化了主題,不失為畫龍點睛之筆。
[例2]directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a passage on“the helpful features of textbooks” based on the following words given: textbooks, school, levels, kids, purpose, learn, therefore, features,information, contentsts,page, understand, divide, sections, finally, alphabetical, mast, help, quickly, efficiently.
[范文]
the helpful features of textbooks
textbooks are books that students use in schools. students at all levels and in all kinds of schools use textbooks. they have certain features in common—features that can help students find and understand the information in them.
all textbooks have tables of contents at the beginning. the tables of contents list the chapter titles, the parts of the chapters,and the page numbers of the parts. these sections are divided again into smaller parts with headings and subheadings. finally, most textbooks have an index at the back of the book. the index lists all the topics in the book in alphabetical order, and gives their page numbers.
these are the features of most textbooks, which help students find and understand the information in textbooks quickly and efficiently.
文章一開頭用定義法給教材下了個定義。接下來具體說明教材的主要特征。最后一段與第一段相呼應,并重復和強調(diào)了幾個關鍵詞中的關鍵詞,比如textbooks,information等。
第四節(jié)圖表作文
圖表作文要求考生用文字材料把圖表中所提供的信息準確、完整地表達出來。在寫作圖表作文時,首先要仔細觀察并分析圖表,以及題中所給出的有關信息,比如,作文題,英文提綱、英文提示、英語關鍵詞等。在分析圖表時,要抓住與主題有關的信息,要發(fā)現(xiàn)數(shù)據(jù)呈現(xiàn)的規(guī)律,要充分利用圖表中的圖形、數(shù)據(jù)等去說明主題。但是注意不要過多地引用數(shù)據(jù),以免造成濫用數(shù)據(jù)的后果。另外,在寫作圖表作文時可以套用一些常用詞匯或表達方式,這將有助于你寫出較為地道的圖表作文。例如:
①as can be seen from the table (graph, form) that……
②from the above table it can be seen (concluded) that……
③a careful study of the table shows that……
④the number (percentage) is 3 times as much as that in 2000.
⑤it has decreased (fell, dropped) about twice, compared with (as compared with, as against) that of 2000.
⑥in 2001, it increased (went up, rose) from 5 to 15 percent of the total (to 15 percent, by 15 percent)。
[例1]directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 100 words on changes in people‘s diet. study the following table carefully and your composition must be based on the information given in the table. write three paragraphs to:
1. state the changes in people‘s diet(飲食)in the past five years
2. give possible reasons for the changes
3. draw your own conclusion
you should quote as few figures as possible.