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寫(xiě)在前面：10月16日又參加雅思考試，主要是想磨磨刀，給自己的教學(xué)添加一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作又是考了八分。慚愧！真不如人家一個(gè)17歲的小女孩who拿了九分?？纪炅酥笪伊⒓椿貞浺蛔植宦┑貙ask2記錄下來(lái)。現(xiàn)將其供無(wú)憂的新老朋友們參考-------賴勁松。
TOPIC Advertising is having a bigger influence on our daily lives. Some people believe the negative effects of advertising outweigh the positive effects. What’s your opinion?
我簡(jiǎn)單地審了一下題，馬上確定寫(xiě)作思路為introduction一段，positive一段，negative一段，最后一段寫(xiě)出自己的選擇。由于”effects”是復(fù)數(shù),所以每段須有兩個(gè)ideas。開(kāi)始覺(jué)得沒(méi)啥ideas,沒(méi)關(guān)系，邊寫(xiě)introduction邊構(gòu)思，這時(shí)候只過(guò)了不到兩分鐘，我就下筆了。
Nowadays, no matter where you get around in a city or even in the countryside, it is pretty easy for you to find one or two signs introducing a product. This has been increasingly becoming popular in our daily lives. Whether the influence of advertising is good or bad could be examined as follows. (introduction: 54 words)
We will start by talking about the merits of advertising. Firstly, advertising is informative, which provides the customers with a quick access to the product needed. Take me as an example. I am a new resident of Guangzhou, a metropolitan city located in the south of China. At the very beginning when moving to this city, I did not have a clue about where to purchase all of the necessities for my newly-bought flat. Thanks to the ads on TV and in newspapers, amazingly almost all of the items ranging from furniture to household appliances were settled within a week. Secondly, consumers can expect to have a best price by comparing and contrasting the prices and specifications of the commodity advertised by different suppliers.
(body1: 124 words)
However, advertising involves some defects and I would like to list two of them herein. Initially, the popularity of advertisements has been growing along with the increased layout of design as well as showing up in the marketplace more frequently. The cost will definitely be passed on to the customers. Furthermore, the generation Y would probably lose their individuality because many of them buy the same goods advertised constantly in media during a certain period of time, which makes them appear alike.
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(body2------ 82 words)
After the above analysis of the pros and cons, I tend to be in favor of the positive effects. Undoubtedly, nothing is more important than living in a society where ordinary people can enjoy the conveniences and competitive prices brought by commercials. I believe that the negative effects can be minimized through sustainable economic growth and education.
( 56 words----總共 316 words)
在整個(gè)寫(xiě)作過(guò)程，我有意識(shí)地應(yīng)用了下列技巧，也是我常在課堂上所強(qiáng)調(diào)的：
1． 多變表達(dá)。如除positive and negative我用了merits and defects， good and bad ，pros and cons。 而advantages and disadvantages來(lái)不及用上；還有，advertising=ads=advertisements=commercials， commodity=goods=product=item 等等。
2． 盡量使用長(zhǎng)句，由大量采用過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)及現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)修飾名詞來(lái)實(shí)現(xiàn)，從句也不少；
3. 舉出最少一個(gè)實(shí)例，不講任何空話，不含任何與考題無(wú)關(guān)的內(nèi)容；
4． 注意名詞的數(shù)及謂語(yǔ)的時(shí)態(tài)；
5． 用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞及程度副詞來(lái)把握語(yǔ)氣；
6． 最后采取歸納法，并對(duì)negative effects提出solutions。
以上為我的考試心得，希望對(duì)大家有參考價(jià)值。
（廣州仲愷雅思培訓(xùn)中心 賴勁松）
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寫(xiě)在前面：10月16日又參加雅思考試，主要是想磨磨刀，給自己的教學(xué)添加一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作又是考了八分。慚愧！真不如人家一個(gè)17歲的小女孩who拿了九分?？纪炅酥笪伊⒓椿貞浺蛔植宦┑貙ask2記錄下來(lái)。現(xiàn)將其供無(wú)憂的新老朋友們參考-------賴勁松。
TOPIC Advertising is having a bigger influence on our daily lives. Some people believe the negative effects of advertising outweigh the positive effects. What’s your opinion?
我簡(jiǎn)單地審了一下題，馬上確定寫(xiě)作思路為introduction一段，positive一段，negative一段，最后一段寫(xiě)出自己的選擇。由于”effects”是復(fù)數(shù),所以每段須有兩個(gè)ideas。開(kāi)始覺(jué)得沒(méi)啥ideas,沒(méi)關(guān)系，邊寫(xiě)introduction邊構(gòu)思，這時(shí)候只過(guò)了不到兩分鐘，我就下筆了。
Nowadays, no matter where you get around in a city or even in the countryside, it is pretty easy for you to find one or two signs introducing a product. This has been increasingly becoming popular in our daily lives. Whether the influence of advertising is good or bad could be examined as follows. (introduction: 54 words)
We will start by talking about the merits of advertising. Firstly, advertising is informative, which provides the customers with a quick access to the product needed. Take me as an example. I am a new resident of Guangzhou, a metropolitan city located in the south of China. At the very beginning when moving to this city, I did not have a clue about where to purchase all of the necessities for my newly-bought flat. Thanks to the ads on TV and in newspapers, amazingly almost all of the items ranging from furniture to household appliances were settled within a week. Secondly, consumers can expect to have a best price by comparing and contrasting the prices and specifications of the commodity advertised by different suppliers.
(body1: 124 words)
However, advertising involves some defects and I would like to list two of them herein. Initially, the popularity of advertisements has been growing along with the increased layout of design as well as showing up in the marketplace more frequently. The cost will definitely be passed on to the customers. Furthermore, the generation Y would probably lose their individuality because many of them buy the same goods advertised constantly in media during a certain period of time, which makes them appear alike.
liuxue86.com雅思作文網(wǎng),您的學(xué)習(xí)好幫手!感謝您閱覽《10月16日A廣告利弊(八分范文)及應(yīng)試技巧》一文.本文來(lái)自雅思作文網(wǎng)liuxue86.com《10月16日A廣告利弊(八分范文)及應(yīng)試技巧》。
(body2------ 82 words)
After the above analysis of the pros and cons, I tend to be in favor of the positive effects. Undoubtedly, nothing is more important than living in a society where ordinary people can enjoy the conveniences and competitive prices brought by commercials. I believe that the negative effects can be minimized through sustainable economic growth and education.
( 56 words----總共 316 words)
在整個(gè)寫(xiě)作過(guò)程，我有意識(shí)地應(yīng)用了下列技巧，也是我常在課堂上所強(qiáng)調(diào)的：
1． 多變表達(dá)。如除positive and negative我用了merits and defects， good and bad ，pros and cons。 而advantages and disadvantages來(lái)不及用上；還有，advertising=ads=advertisements=commercials， commodity=goods=product=item 等等。
2． 盡量使用長(zhǎng)句，由大量采用過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)及現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)修飾名詞來(lái)實(shí)現(xiàn)，從句也不少；
3. 舉出最少一個(gè)實(shí)例，不講任何空話，不含任何與考題無(wú)關(guān)的內(nèi)容；
4． 注意名詞的數(shù)及謂語(yǔ)的時(shí)態(tài)；
5． 用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞及程度副詞來(lái)把握語(yǔ)氣；
6． 最后采取歸納法，并對(duì)negative effects提出solutions。
以上為我的考試心得，希望對(duì)大家有參考價(jià)值。
（廣州仲愷雅思培訓(xùn)中心 賴勁松）
liuxue86.com雅思作文網(wǎng),您的學(xué)習(xí)好幫手!感謝您閱覽《10月16日A廣告利弊(八分范文)及應(yīng)試技巧》一文.