大家都知道，出國(guó)留學(xué)的重中之重就是要準(zhǔn)備好申請(qǐng)材料，那么申請(qǐng)材料如何準(zhǔn)備呢，應(yīng)該怎么寫(xiě)呢，有些人可能不是很清楚，那么出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)小編就帶大家來(lái)看看出國(guó)留學(xué)推薦信的評(píng)改。
    出國(guó)留學(xué)推薦信的評(píng)改
    來(lái)看幾篇推薦信中的段落，每段都有評(píng)論哦，希望能進(jìn)一步地闡述好的推薦信應(yīng)該怎么寫(xiě)。
    MissRuanjian is now working under my immediate supervision in the EngineeringDepartment of the Heavy-duty Equipment Co, Ltd. Ruanjian has proved to be ofinvaluable assistance in adapting our international corporate operating systemto clear the hurdles of relatively undeveloped Chinese market conditions.
    Oneof Ruanjian’s greatest contributions is in the adaptation and modification ofour integrated IBC (Industrial Boiler Control) software. The rigidity of theprogram structure had often led to complications in our relations with ourclients. She was able to work with both the program and with our clients tosmooth points of friction and eventually satisfy our clients. Subsequently, shehas succeeded in adapting our program to avoid such further instances. Shelearns from mistakes and quickly takes steps to avoid them in the future.
    評(píng)論：
    一般在第一段就要說(shuō)清楚推薦人與被推薦人的關(guān)系、雙方各處于什么職位。如果被推薦人是推薦人的雇員或者合作伙伴，應(yīng)該說(shuō)明被推薦人的職位以及工作職責(zé)，也可以概括一下被推薦人所做的一些重點(diǎn)項(xiàng)目。最后也可以用一句話總體評(píng)價(jià)一下被推薦人。
    本文雖然只選了兩段，但已經(jīng)是推薦信的主要內(nèi)容了。在這篇推薦信里，推薦人并沒(méi)有使用太多的形容詞，只是讓事實(shí)本身說(shuō)話。被推薦人“軟件小姐”在公司里銷售與重工業(yè)設(shè)備配套的軟件。因?yàn)槊恳粋€(gè)單位的設(shè)施不盡相同，因此經(jīng)常需要對(duì)軟件產(chǎn)品作適當(dāng)?shù)恼{(diào)整，并且與申請(qǐng)者進(jìn)行充分的溝通?！败浖〗恪狈浅偃芜@項(xiàng)工作，并且有能力從以往的錯(cuò)誤中總結(jié)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，指導(dǎo)今后的銷售工作。雖然敘述的事情不多，但非常具體、真實(shí)，連軟件的名稱和用處都予以了說(shuō)明。這樣的推薦信通過(guò)事例來(lái)說(shuō)明一個(gè)人的經(jīng)歷和能力，盡管簡(jiǎn)短卻要言不煩，非常有效。
    Atthis water plant, she has consistently demonstrated a keen mind and impeccablework ethics. She started working as my assistant when I was conducting researchon the application of the fiber filtering technology to the treatment ofdrinking water, which is traditionally treated with sodium silicate. Myresearch represented the first attempt at applying the fiber filteringtechnology outside the realm of industrial wastewater treatment.
    Ms.Du stopped at nothing in her effort to learn. She quickly learned to operateall the equipment and devices skillfully. When the plant completed convertingthe old filters into fast-filters, she seized the occasion as a goodopportunity for her to practice what she had learned. Assigned to test thequality of the water flowing out of the new filters, she had to do protracteddata recording to find out the functioning of the new filters under differentconditions. Undeterred by the monotony of the job, she discharged her dutieswith great patience and meticulous care.
    評(píng)論：
    在接下來(lái)的段落中，要通過(guò)具體事例對(duì)被推薦人進(jìn)行多方面的評(píng)價(jià)。如被推薦人的知識(shí)、興趣、能力、性格、社會(huì)技能、與同事同學(xué)的關(guān)系等等，推薦人應(yīng)該很客觀的進(jìn)行評(píng)論，這樣才能幫助被推薦人。切記，一定要重點(diǎn)推薦被推薦人是否具備其所要申請(qǐng)的專業(yè)應(yīng)該具備的素質(zhì)。
    以上這封推薦信介紹了學(xué)環(huán)境工程的杜女士在工作上的表現(xiàn)，她的工作是配合研制水凈化設(shè)備。本文沒(méi)有像許多申請(qǐng)者那樣把一個(gè)剛出道的年輕工程師吹捧成一個(gè)大師，“獨(dú)立承擔(dān)著”某項(xiàng)劃時(shí)代的科研項(xiàng)目，而是恰如其分地介紹了杜女士在工作的初期還在繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)，她在這段培訓(xùn)過(guò)程中十分地刻苦，工作十分細(xì)致，出色地完成了非?？菰锏摹⒅貜?fù)性的數(shù)據(jù)記錄工作。
    其實(shí)國(guó)外任何指導(dǎo)實(shí)驗(yàn)的教授都知道，一個(gè)研究生剛畢業(yè)到了研究部門(mén)只能是做些輔助的工作，所以杜女士擁有這樣的經(jīng)歷已經(jīng)足以說(shuō)明其素質(zhì)和能力了。所以在推薦信中，切忌不切實(shí)際地瞎吹。否則，就會(huì)弄巧成拙，反而會(huì)起到反效果。
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