英國留學(xué)少不了需要提交留學(xué)申請(qǐng)推薦信,如何提交一篇好的推薦信,這對(duì)于留學(xué)申請(qǐng)來說有著至關(guān)重要的作用。下面出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)為大家分享英國高中留學(xué)推薦信模板。進(jìn)一步地闡述好的留學(xué)推薦信應(yīng)該怎么寫。
Miss Ruanjian is now working under my immediate supervision in the Engineering Department of the Heavy-duty Equipment Co, Ltd. Ruanjian has proved to be of invaluable assistance in adapting our international corporate operating system to clear the hurdles of relatively undeveloped Chinese market conditions.
One of Ruanjian's greatest contributions is in the adaptation and modification of our integrated IBC (Industrial Boiler Control) software. The rigidity of the program structure had often led to complications in our relations with our clients. She was able to work with both the program and with our clients to smooth points of friction and eventually satisfy our clients. Subsequently, she has succeeded in adapting our program to avoid such further instances. She learns from mistakes and quickly takes steps to avoid them in the future.
評(píng)論:
我們一般在第一段就要說清楚推薦人與被推薦人的關(guān)系、雙方各處于什么職位。如果被推薦人是推薦人的雇員或者合作伙伴,應(yīng)該說明被推薦人的職位以及工作職責(zé),也可以概括一下被推薦人所做的一些重點(diǎn)項(xiàng)目。最后也可以用一句話總體評(píng)價(jià)一下被推薦人。
本文雖然只選了兩段,但已經(jīng)是推薦信的主要內(nèi)容了。在這篇推薦信里,推薦人并沒有使用太多的形容詞,只是讓事實(shí)本身說話。被推薦人“軟件小姐”在公司里銷售與重工業(yè)設(shè)備配套的軟件。因?yàn)槊恳粋€(gè)單位的設(shè)施不盡相同,因此經(jīng)常需要對(duì)軟件產(chǎn)品作適當(dāng)?shù)恼{(diào)整,并且與申請(qǐng)者進(jìn)行充分的溝通。“軟件小姐”非常勝任這項(xiàng)工作,并且有能力從以往的錯(cuò)誤中總結(jié)經(jīng)驗(yàn),指導(dǎo)今后的銷售工作。雖然敘述的事情不多,但非常具體、真實(shí),連軟件的名稱和用處都予以了說明。這樣的推薦信通過事例來說明一個(gè)人的經(jīng)歷和能力,盡管簡短卻要言不煩,非常有效。
At this water plant, she has consistently demonstrated a keen mind and impeccable work ethics. She started working as my assistant when I was conducting research on the application of the fiber filtering technology to the treatment of drinking water, which is traditionally treated with sodium silicate. My research represented the first attempt at applying the fiber filtering technology outside the realm of industrial wastewater treatment.
Ms. Du stopped at nothing in her effort to learn. She quickly learned to operate all the equipment and devices skillfully. When the plant completed converting the old filters into fast-filters, she seized the occasion as a good opportunity for her to practice what she had learned. Assigned to test the quality of the water flowing out of the new filters, she had to do protracted data recording to find out the functioning of the new filters under different conditions. Undeterred by the monotony of the job, she discharged her duties with great patience and meticulous care.
評(píng)論:
在接下來的段落中,要通過具體事例對(duì)被推薦人進(jìn)行多方面的評(píng)價(jià)。如被推薦人的知識(shí)、興趣、能力、性格、社會(huì)技能、與同事同學(xué)的關(guān)系等等,推薦人應(yīng)該很客觀的進(jìn)行評(píng)論,這樣才能幫助被推薦人。切記,一定要重點(diǎn)推薦被推薦人是否具備其所要申請(qǐng)的專業(yè)應(yīng)該具備的素質(zhì)。
以上這封推薦信介紹了學(xué)環(huán)境工程的杜女士在工作上的表現(xiàn),她的工作是配合研制水凈化設(shè)備。本文沒有像許多申請(qǐng)者那樣把一個(gè)剛出道的年輕工程師吹捧成一個(gè)大師, “獨(dú)立承擔(dān)著”某項(xiàng)劃時(shí)代的科研項(xiàng)目,而是恰如其分地介紹了杜女士在工作的初期還在繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí),她在這段培訓(xùn)過程中十分地刻苦,工作十分細(xì)致,出色地完成了非??菰锏摹⒅貜?fù)性的數(shù)據(jù)記錄工作。