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    As is vividly depicted in the picture, two drain pipes are draining much sewage into the river while some chimneys emit poison gas into the sky.(首段內(nèi)容較為簡(jiǎn)略，可適當(dāng)添加)Why do(改為does) our environment get more and more bad(表達(dá)有誤，“越來越糟”應(yīng)表示為worse and worse)? The main reason is(后面若要跟句子，就應(yīng)該用從句來表述，加that) there are a lot of factories that(去掉) emit so much sewage and poison gas that aren't purified into our nature directly. Besides, we don't have a few good habits, so you can see littering, spitting and smoking frequently. There are so many people who are using plastic bag.Of course, we need plenty of factories because they will promote the development of our economy. But does it mean that our environment has to be contaminated? Our economy must be development(此處應(yīng)選擇動(dòng)詞，改為developed), but it shouldn't be at the expense of the pollution of our environment. We shouldn't be so selfish that we disregard the next generation. (一句話中出現(xiàn)兩個(gè)we，不妥，建議作者將此句話改為：We shouldn’t be selfish to disregard to the next generation )We must protect our environment! On the one hand, it isn't until we dispose of sewage and poison gas that we can emit . On the other hand, we must encourage people to give up the bad habit(改為habits).Let's work together to have a beautiful country!
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