如何寫出英語作文得分的“亮點”
    以下幾種手段是增加句子復(fù)雜性的常見方法,也是得高分的“亮點”。
    1. 改變句子的開頭方式,不是一味地都是主語開頭,接著是謂語、賓語,最后再加一個狀語?？梢园褷钫Z置于句首,或用分詞作狀語等。試比較:
    (原文) My brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle the other day.
    (修正) The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.
    (原文) The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.
    (修正) Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.
    2. 在整篇文章中,避免只使用一兩個句式,要靈活運用諸如強調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句、分詞短語、倒裝句、省略句等。例如:
    (1)強調(diào)句
    (原文) The dog has saved my little sister bravely.
    (修正) It is the dog that has saved my little sister bravely.
    (2)主從復(fù)合句
    (原文) We had to stand there to catch the offender.
    (修正) What we had to do was to stand there, trying to catch the offender.
    (3)分詞短語、由with或without引導(dǎo)的短語
    (原文) The driver escaped and didn’t stop, he left the old man lying on the road.
    (修正) The driver escaped without stopping, leaving the old man lying on the road.
    (4)倒裝句
    (原文) I went to bed at 11:30.
    (修正) Not until 11:30 did I go to bed.
    (5)省略句
    (原文) While you are crossing the street, you should be careful.
    (修正) While crossing the street, you should be careful.
    3. 通過分句和合句,增強句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力。例如:
    (原文) He stopped us an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.
    (修正) He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
    (原文) We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.
    (修正) After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing.
    4. 注意連接詞與句子的運用。
    以2001年
    高考作文為例,在信的開頭,可加上“You want to know something about what is going on in schools in China?”這句話起承上啟下的作用,使文章過渡自然;再如,用“What was worse?”引出減負前,晚上還要做作業(yè),就寢時間11:30等要點。又如,“Now I have more free time...” 可引出減負后的情況。另外,在信的結(jié)尾,可用“How about you? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.”來自然地結(jié)束這封信。
    5. 使用過渡詞語。
    寫好了每個句子,并不一定就是一篇
    好文章,因為作為一篇文章,還必須行文連貫。那么,如何使文章行文連貫?zāi)?這就要求我們在組成篇章時,要用好過渡性詞語,過渡性詞語就像是我們組裝機械時使用的潤滑劑一樣,起著潤滑的作用。常用的過渡詞語主要有:
    并列遞進:and, also, as well as, besides, what’s more, furthermore, moreover, etc.
    轉(zhuǎn)折:but, yet, however, although, nevertheless, in spite of, after all, etc.
    因果:because, as, for, since, for this reason, because of, so, therefore, thus, as a result, etc.
    對比:or, otherwise, like, unlike, on the contrary, while, on the other hand, instead of, etc.
    總結(jié):in all, in brief, on the whole, in short, in general, in one word, etc.　
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    高考英語作文模板：議論文的框架
    (1)?不同觀點列舉型（?選擇型?）
    　There?is?a?widespread?concern?over?the?issue?that?__作文題目_____.?But?it?is?well?known?that?the?opinion
    ?concerning?this?hot?topic?varies?from?person?to?person.?A?majority?of?people?think?that?_?觀點一________.?In?
    their?views?there?are?2?factors?contributing?to?this?attitude?as?follows:?in?the?first?place,?___原因一_______.Furthermore,?in?the?second?place,?___原因二_____.?So?it?goes?without?saying?that?___觀點一_____.?
    People,　however,　differ　in　their　opinions　on　this　matter.　Some　people　hold?the?idea?that?___觀點二_______.?In?their?point?of?view,?on?the?one?hand，?___原因一_______.??On?the?other?hand,?____原因二_____.?Therefore,?there　is?no　doubt　that?___觀點二______.　?
    　As?far?as?I?am?concerned,?I　firmly　support　the　view　that?__觀點一或二______.　It　is?not?only?because?________,?but?also?because?_________.?The?more?_______,?the?more?________.?
    ?（2）利弊型的議論文
    Nowadays,?there?is?a?widespread?concern?over?(the?issue?that)___作文題目______.?In?fact,?there?are?both?
    advantages?and?disadvantages?in?__題目議題_____.?Generally?speaking,?it?is?widely?believed?there?are?
    several?positive?aspects?as?follows.?Firstly,?___優(yōu)點一______.??And?secondly?___優(yōu)點二_____.?
    Just?As?a?popular?saying?goes,?"every?coin?has?two?sides",?__討論議題______?is?no?exception,?and?in?another?
    word,?it?still?has?negative?aspects.?To?begin?with,?___缺點一______.?In?addition,??____缺點二______.?
    To?sum?up,?we?should?try?to?bring?the?advantages?of?__討論議題____?into?full?play,?and?reduce
    ?the?disadvantagesto?the?minimum?at?the?same?time.?In?that?case,?we?will?definitely?make?a?better?use?of?the?____討論議題___.
    (?3?)?答題性議論文
    ???Currently,?there?is?a?widespread?concern?over?(the?issue?that)__作文題目_______?.It?is?really?an?important?
    concern?to?every?one?of?us.?As?a?result,?we?must?spare?no?efforts?to?take?some?measures?to?solve?this?problem.
    ???As?we?know?that?there?are?many?steps?which?can?be?taken?to?undo?this?problem.?First?of?all,?__途徑一______.?In?addition,?another?way?contributing?to?success?of?the?solving?problem?is?___途徑二_____.
    ???Above?all,?to?solve?the?problem?of?___作文題目______,?we?should?find?a?number?of?various
    ?ways.?But?as?far?as?I?am?concerned,?I?would?prefer?to?solve?the?problem?in?this?way,?that?is?to?say,?____方法_____.
    (?4?)?諺語警句性議論文
    ????It?is?well?know?to?us?that?the?proverb:?"?___諺語_______"?has?a?profound?significance?and?value?not?only?in
    ?our?job?but?also?in?our?study.?It?means?____諺語的含義_______.?The?saying?can be?illustrated?through a?series?
    of?examples?as?follows.?(?also?theoretically?)
    ????A?case?in?point?is?___例子一______.?Therefore,?it?is?goes?without?saying?that?it?is?of?great?of?importance
    ?to?practice?the?proverb?____諺語_____.
    ????With?the?rapid?development?of?science?and?technology?in?China,?an?increasing?number?of?people?come?to?realize?that?it?is?also?of?practical?use?to?stick?to?the?saying:?____諺語_____.?The more?we?are?aware?of?the significance?
    of?this?famous?saying,?the?more?benefits?we?will?get?in?our?daily?study?and?job..
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